comics
In the passage the writer states that comic books are inherently American and unique to American culture. That in it’s origins it comes from American only influences and that any other kind of comic related form of art stems from this source. The writer even provides historical proof of his point pointing at the first successful comic strip “Hogan’s Alley”, a 1980s comic strip featuring america’s middle class life problems in New York, the writer also mentions action comics that features the first super hero, superman, is also American-made.
While it’s indeed true what the writer mentions the speaker from the audio corrects the statement from the writer’s passage and makes the following declarations:
First, the first comic books ever made where British and Swedish and those were published in the 1970s.
Second, while Hogans Alley was indeed an American comic strip, it features the life of an inmigrant living in New York and how he struggles to get by in his new home. The speaker even mentions tintin (belgiums first successful comic) that is sixteen years older than action comics.
The speaker also corrects the writer when the former mentions that Japanese manga is heavily inspired by American comic books from WWII and points at traditional Japanese art as the principal inspiration to this derivation of comics.
Finally, the speaker also mentions Asterix an obelix, and the Disney European comics too. Çsaying that even though the comics from Europe are indeed influenced by American comics, they are drawn and even written in a very unique way that only can be found in the old continent. Thus, stating that comic books don’t belong only to the USA but to the whole world and all cultures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 217, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...s, they are drawn and even written in a very unique way that only can be found in the old c...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, thus, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 285.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18947368421 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60157397252 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536842105263 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3707404704 49.2860985944 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.9 110.228320801 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 21.698381199 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346579538944 0.272083759551 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176653789194 0.0996497079465 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441864182062 0.0662205650399 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19089743592 0.162205337803 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105398476186 0.0443174109184 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.8541721854 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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