Critics say that current voting systems used in the United States are inefficient and often lead to
the inaccurate counting of votes. Miscounts can be especially damaging if an election is closely
contested. Those critics would like the traditional systems to be replaced with far more efficient
and trustworthy computerized voting systems.
In traditional voting, one major source of inaccuracy is that people accidentally vote for the
wrong candidate. Voters usually have to find the name of their candidate on a large sheet of
paper containing many names—the ballot—and make a small mark next to that name. People
with poor eyesight can easily mark the wrong name. The computerized voting machines have an
easy-to-use touch-screen technology: to cast a vote, a voter needs only to touch the candidate’s
name on the screen to record a vote for that candidate; voters can even have the computer
magnify the name for easier viewing.
Another major problem with old voting systems is that they rely heavily on people to count the
votes. Officials must often count up the votes one by one, going through every ballot and
recording the vote. Since they have to deal with thousands of ballots, it is almost inevitable that
they will make mistakes. If an error is detected, a long and expensive recount has to take place.
In contrast, computerized systems remove the possibility of human error, since all the vote
counting is done quickly and automatically by the computers.
Finally some people say it is too risky to implement complicated voting technology nationwide.
But without giving it a thought, governments and individuals alike trust other complex computer
technology every day to be perfectly accurate in banking transactions as well as in the
communication of highly sensitive information.
The leture disgreed with the article's opinions. It's not a better solution to use the computerized
voting systems.
Firstly, it might be hard for the voters who don't use the computer so often, or the users who is
fear of the technology, even some of voters can not aford a computer. Touch screen may also be
hard to use for people who is not familiar with computers. Secondly, computer is programmed
by human beings, which means it can also have errors. Instead of human being's counting error,
which only results one or two counting error in number, an errror in the program code could
cause tramendous error in number. In case of the computer crash or disaster, it may lost all the
voting information. We can not even to make a re-count. Lastly, our daily banking or other
highly sensitive infomation system, is actually improved as time goes by. They were also
problematic at the beginning. As we use them so often, we have more chances to find problems,
and furturemore, to fix and improve them. However, for the voting system, we only use them
every 2 years nationally and some other rare events. We just don't use it often enough to find a
bug or test it thoroughly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 209.0 270.72406181 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54004353465 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602870813397 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1346844937 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.09492273731 317% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 4.19205298013 382% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169677100297 0.272083759551 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562490667842 0.0996497079465 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348034507988 0.0662205650399 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518935913719 0.162205337803 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035312450107 0.0443174109184 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.