Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure successful future Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, No one can casts doubt on the choosing a appropriate career has paramount significance in the future of person, and the consultancy of employment achievement is recently becoming quite trendy among societies. It is my empathetic belief that in the past it was more comfortable to recognize what kind of career or jobs would make to a secure, successful future. If I were asked to determine a couple of reasons standing behind my points of view, I would strongly suggest the lower capacity of career, more competitiveness, and growth in population number leads to a difficulty to reaching a career at now.
I will manifest my reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.

without an adumbration of doubt the technology has been eased to access to the diversity of resource about how to find a job, being a high quality employee notwithstanding, it is no quarantine to getting a career or job. the career finding seems more difficult to achieve recently; however, there are a more path to secure a successful future; due to increasing of population of countries and migration rates, the capacity of jobs became lower, thereby becoming more competitiveness pool applicant for jobs. My personal experience is the compelling evidence for what I mean; when I applied abroad to study, there was almost one hundred applicant from all over the world, my success chance to accept was one percent; therefore, I decided to try other universities to enhance my chance.

It also goes without declaring that the job diversity limitation in the past made individuals to identify whatever they wanted swiftly. not only assigned they less time to search occupations, but can they find more suitable works title. to be more specific, when my parent decided to choice a job, they had several option in their hands without apprehension , and worriedness. it has not enough job opportunity now. rather, a person should make his or her own jobs by himself or herself.

It can be summed up by accentuating that the more successful future demands the more inquiry to jobs pools and opportunity in recent times. I agree with the idea that In the last millennia it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. whether or not accept this idea, with the passing time; the technology and the population number rocketing up, find secure job will be arduous effort for the next generation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cast'
Suggestion: cast
Nowadays, No one can casts doubt on the choosing a appropriate car...
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Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... No one can casts doubt on the choosing a appropriate career has paramount signif...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Without
...sons in the subsequent paragraphs. without an adumbration of doubt the technology ...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... quarantine to getting a career or job. the career finding seems more difficult to ...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'paths'?
Suggestion: paths
...eve recently; however, there are a more path to secure a successful future; due to i...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
... identify whatever they wanted swiftly. not only assigned they less time to search...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y wanted swiftly. not only assigned they less time to search occupations, but can...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...an they find more suitable works title. to be more specific, when my parent decide...
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Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun option seems to be countable; consider using: 'several options'.
Suggestion: several options
...arent decided to choice a job, they had several option in their hands without apprehension , a...
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Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tion in their hands without apprehension , and worriedness. it has not enough job ...
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Line 7, column 379, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...without apprehension , and worriedness. it has not enough job opportunity now. rat...
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Line 7, column 418, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Rather
... it has not enough job opportunity now. rather, a person should make his or her own jo...
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Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with the idea that In the last millennia it was easier to identify what type of c...
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Line 9, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whether
...ld lead to a secure, successful future. whether or not accept this idea, with the passi...
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Line 9, column 287, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ld lead to a secure, successful future. whether or not accept this idea, with the passing time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, i mean, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 30.3222958057 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1373.03311258 147% => OK
No of words: 405.0 270.72406181 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97530864198 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93132941348 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 145.348785872 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550617283951 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 419.366225166 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0683168133 49.2860985944 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.333333333 110.228320801 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 21.698381199 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06452816374 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236721347644 0.272083759551 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868212231793 0.0996497079465 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935072182004 0.0662205650399 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132201015599 0.162205337803 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809187414046 0.0443174109184 183% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.3589403974 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 63.6247240618 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.7273730684 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, i mean, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments