Humans have long been fascinated by elephants, the largest land animal in the modern world. Social animals that live in herds, elephants are native to both Africa and Asia. Their large ears, long trunk, and long life span have made elephants one of the most captivating creatures on Earth. Our long-standing interest in elephants has led to several beliefs about surprising elephant behaviors.
The article states that several beliefs about surprising elephant behaviors fascinated human since human acquainted with creature. and provide three reasons for support. However the professor explains that this fascinating due to misunderstanding of elephant behaviors, consequently, make people believe to elephant unnatural behavior long-standing interest. and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading states that the elephants know that they are nearing the end of their lives, then they go to “elephant graveyards” to die alone. the professor refutes this point by stating that knowing death time, maybe due to practical reasons such as destruction of teeth of elephants or other behavioral activity, she mentions that elephants when their teeth being unusable, they go to near the water and eat soft plant tissue and eventually die close to body of water.
Second, the article claims that elephants seem to have artistic ability such as drawings flowers, other elephants, even themselves. However, the professor contends that if any individual watch elephant when they are painting, trainers of elephant stroking the ears of elephant and teach them how to paint and train and encourage them paint a certain pattern.
Third, the reading avers that elephants have a fear of mice , and when see the mice, the elephants backed away from the mice and left the area to avoid them. the lecturer opposes this point by saying that the mice unfamiliar to elephant and the elephant has natural instinct to away from treat like mice, if mice introduced to place where elephant live in , the elephant not avoid them.
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...roduced to place where elephant live in , the elephant not avoid them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 259.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33976833977 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6897042927 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.9551686153 49.2860985944 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.3 110.228320801 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 21.698381199 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265493243315 0.272083759551 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104159874707 0.0996497079465 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593296560078 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160449485121 0.162205337803 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262831628181 0.0443174109184 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.3589403974 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.