Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people believe that smaller colleges and universities provide students with a better educational experience by, for example, offering more individual attention to each student. Other people believe that larger colleges and universities provide a better educational experience. Which view do you agree with and why?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the advancement of technology, we have much convenient transportation system now, enabling us to travel from one city to another easily. In such a situation, people have the ability to select the city which they would like to live in. Some people prefer to live in one town or city all their live, while others not. From my perspective, I'd like to move from one place to another. Here are my reasons:
First of all, living in different cities enables me to experience various culture. Difference places have different customs and traditions. If I live in one city constantly, the people I react with every day are always the same, which means a constant pattern of a regular life. However, if a move to another city periodically, the people I deal with are always changing. In this way, I can always have a taste of new things. I still remember my last journey to Yunnan province, which is quite novel and pleasure. At Yunnan province, they have all kinds of mushrooms which I never know at my hometown. Besides, some unique festivals like Fire Festival is also very interesting.
Secondly, moving from one place to another can always make me in comfortable environments. Different places have different weather traits. Some cities are hot in summer and cool in winter, while some may be cool all the year. Thus, I can always place myself at comfortable circumstance by moving from one city to another. For example, currently I live in Shenzhen, which is quite hot at summer but relatively warm at winter. In the future if I'm equipped with the ability to live in whichever the city I like to choose, I must choose to spend my whole winter time at Shenzhen where is warm and damp.
Thirdly, some may argue the moving to another city will lead to losing connection with old friends. I have to admit that this opinion makes some sense to some extent, because we cannot meet face to face with our old friends if we move to another city. However, what we also need to know is that, with the technology development of video communications and IM chat tools, we have multiple ways to get touch with our friends, and we can still maintain the relationship with them in this way even if we move to somewhere else. Besides, with the decreasing cost and improving speed of transportation system, flying to the original city to meet old friends is no longer a big deal. What's more, although we may lose some connection with our old friends, we will also make some new friends to enrich our social circles.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... while others not. From my perspective, Id like to move from one place to another....
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Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tively warm at winter. In the future if Im equipped with the ability to live in wh...
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Line 7, column 678, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...et old friends is no longer a big deal. Whats more, although we may lose some connect...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 22.412803532 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 30.3222958057 244% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1373.03311258 150% => OK
No of words: 443.0 270.72406181 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66139954853 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6104316107 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 145.348785872 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48532731377 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 419.366225166 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0032686348 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7826086957 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2608695652 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 4.33554083885 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115984932522 0.272083759551 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374347300001 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353258177121 0.0662205650399 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737844616983 0.162205337803 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241986918802 0.0443174109184 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... while others not. From my perspective, Id like to move from one place to another....
^^
Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tively warm at winter. In the future if Im equipped with the ability to live in wh...
^^
Line 7, column 678, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...et old friends is no longer a big deal. Whats more, although we may lose some connect...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 22.412803532 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 30.3222958057 244% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1373.03311258 150% => OK
No of words: 443.0 270.72406181 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66139954853 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6104316107 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 145.348785872 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48532731377 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 419.366225166 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0032686348 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7826086957 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2608695652 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 4.33554083885 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115984932522 0.272083759551 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374347300001 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353258177121 0.0662205650399 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737844616983 0.162205337803 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241986918802 0.0443174109184 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.