Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people
nowadays do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past.
Nowadays, in such a progressive world we live in, teachers have been considered to be effective elements of every society. Their role in educating students, the people who are in charge of building country’s future, cannot be underestimated. In this vein, the relationship between teacher and students has been the heated debates among many people to evaluate whether students are being respectful about their teachers during the recent years or not. Personally speaking, I agree upon this fact that recently, there has been a reduction of gratefulness for teachers by students and I support my reasons to elaborate my point of view in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I should admit that most of the teachers in the past, were far older than the teachers living nowadays and they were not only more thoughtful and accomplished but also they had the ability to manage some classes together at the same time indicating their fully-concentrated mind. However, teachers in this era, neither can fulfill their teaching hours as a single class nor having enough focus to deal with variety of students at the same time. For instance, I red a book about a teacher from the beginning of 19th century who was so respected by his students at the time due to the highly-skilled style in teaching math, literature and chemistry, that the government named the central library of his town after his name. Therefore, that is how highly respected teachers are treated.
The other subtle point to be mentioned is that with by advent of technology and high quality equipment including computers, satellites and video projectors, the role of teachers has been inconspicuous since these instruments have been replaced by teachers. If students face a problems, they easily search in the net through computers and find out plentiful information about their issue. As an illustration, when I was in the college, I had a very difficult exam and I did not know how to solve its questions. In spite of the fact that our teacher had announced us to visit him in the case we had any question, I prefer to search in the internet and find out how to solve the problems. Thus, the technology has changed the way students treat their teacher.
To sum it up, contemplating al reasons, one soon realizes that compared to the recent decades,, teacher have been less respected not only because of their less knowledge and domination on the materials, but also due to the advance of high-tech instruments by which students can find answer of any question. Isn’t the right time for teachers to consider this challenging issue and improve their styles according to nowadays criteria?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a problem' or simply 'problems'?
Suggestion: a problem; problems
... replaced by teachers. If students face a problems, they easily search in the net through ...
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Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...izes that compared to the recent decades,, teacher have been less respected not on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 22.412803532 192% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 30.3222958057 237% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2224.0 1373.03311258 162% => OK
No of words: 445.0 270.72406181 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99775280899 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88460383334 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 145.348785872 171% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557303370787 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 419.366225166 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1531789663 49.2860985944 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.266666667 110.228320801 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 21.698381199 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181736925051 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649524483459 0.0996497079465 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329751936739 0.0662205650399 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109056961976 0.162205337803 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250627033396 0.0443174109184 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.3589403974 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 63.6247240618 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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