do you agree or disagree? The way people dresses is a good indication of his or her personality or character?
The question is whether the way people dresses is a good indication of their personality or not. Needless to say that humankinds have fundamentally different preferences for what they wear. In addition, in this modern era which we are living in clothes are not simply use for covering people’s body. Although a substantial number of people believe that there is no way to understanding the personality of a person on account of their clothes, personally speaking, I strongly believe that the way people dresses is a good indication of his or her character inasmuch as any behavior is rooted in something deeper. I will elaborate upon the momentous reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, the clothes which people wear can reveal their desires and preference. I strongly assert, as an instance, people who spend monumental amount of money for buying clothes are those who the appearance of others take over their reality. To exemplify, Buying the most expensive clothes in the market, my cousin contends that just people who dress well should be respected in the society. Never does she pay attention to the poor by having this in mind. Let’s take people who wear shinny clothes, do not you think they would like to attract others attention? What is your opinion about a person who clothes modestly? In a word, there are a good many clues in the way that anybody wear for realizing his personality.
Second, how much a person’s clothes are clean indicate another feature of the person. It goes without saying that well-organized people prefer to always be clean. In my view, too well-organized a person wears spotlessly clean dresses. To pave the way for this example, I would like to give an example of my own experience. When I saw my husband for the first time, too clean a suit. I considered him as a well-organized man. In the long run, now, I have understood that he is so organized a gentleman and he lived up my expectation. Hence, the more clean the dress, the more organized the person.
In the final analysis, according to above-mentioned points and details, I firmly agree that anybody’s clothes are a good indicator of his personality inasmuch as it reveals the person’s priority. Besides, how clean the clothes are also shows how the person is organized. Then, why not accept this fact that a person’s clothes talk with others? I highly recommend watch what you wear owing to their great importance role in revealing your character.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, if, second, so, then, well, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 22.412803532 223% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1373.03311258 151% => OK
No of words: 417.0 270.72406181 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96642685851 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94661481382 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 145.348785872 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534772182254 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 419.366225166 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 2.5761589404 349% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 13.0662251656 184% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.218509704 49.2860985944 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2916666667 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06452816374 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323576850079 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081671688098 0.0996497079465 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103788976334 0.0662205650399 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198363311285 0.162205337803 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101115856894 0.0443174109184 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.3589403974 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 63.6247240618 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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