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From a general point of view, in the booming era of technology, adverted apparatus and equipment have dominated individuals life and determined their lifestyle. This fact can be applied to the industry of film making and television. Impressing effects of television and films on people, particularly youth, is one of the most controversial subjects often provoke many discussions. Some people keep endorsing the fact that TV programs and movies provides benefits for youth whereas others dismiss this idea. Personally, it is my firm conviction that such programs adversely affect younger people. In what fallows, I will thoroughly elucidate on what rationale my perspective is based on.
To commerce, Tv programs and movies waste a myriad of valuable time of young people. Nowadays, a lot of diverse movies and tv programs are being produced and so many broadcasting means have been presenting them. In this line of thought, each of such serial parts of movies lasts something between forty five minute to even three hours which is considered a significant time. It is crystal clear that how precious the time is to young people in their most sensitive span of their life which be dedicated to learning, studying and working. Relatively, adolescence spend a noticeable of this valuable gift of time to keep tracking the movie series and serials that are wisely and deceptively produced based on the communities interest and tendencies.
Another equally remarkable reason is that movies can indirectly impress the young group of people and give direction to their willing and behavior. To delineate, individuals' characteristic shapes in the initial years of life and youth is among the most period of life which incorporates in forming one's character. Therefore, role model that teenage follow to determine their own behavior and personality become very important in this period. Point to the other side, artisans' behavior, character and even dialogues, which are not mostly moral and well-accepted, will exceedingly affect the youth. Take my sister's experience as an example. when she was young, a series were very celebrate during that tie which the artists talked with a special accent. Hardly I can remember a youth who did not imitate this ridiculous accent even in formal conversations. In fact, has been part of their normal dialect.
To put it in a nutshell, television and movies adversely affect youth character and behavior. This is not only owning to the fact that such movies, that are composed of often useless programs, waste their time, but also can they negatively shape their behavior.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 309, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'minute' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'minutes'.
Suggestion: minutes
...vies lasts something between forty five minute to even three hours which is considered...
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Line 2, column 712, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'communities'' or 'community's'?
Suggestion: communities'; community's
...y and deceptively produced based on the communities interest and tendencies. Another equal...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...d of life which incorporates in forming ones character. Therefore, role model that t...
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Line 3, column 639, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...ke my sisters experience as an example. when she was young, a series were very celeb...
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Line 3, column 752, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Hardly' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...e artists talked with a special accent. Hardly I can remember a youth who did not imit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 7.30242825607 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2187.0 1373.03311258 159% => OK
No of words: 419.0 270.72406181 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21957040573 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83110427728 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 145.348785872 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570405727924 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 419.366225166 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6219472278 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47619047619 7.06452816374 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0779722191536 0.272083759551 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025950406753 0.0996497079465 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471988223834 0.0662205650399 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626700455724 0.162205337803 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647053724005 0.0443174109184 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 63.6247240618 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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