: In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Lifespan has become one of most important issues these days. Many scientist has doing their best effort to provide longer lifespan for us. Many examination and researches have been done and results have shown that Some crucial factors led to the longer life span.
First, the progress that has been done in medical science obviously play the most important role in giving us the chance of living longer. nowadays alt of researches has been done in order to help doctors to diagnose many diseases that cannot be diagnosed in past decades. Many different rare diseases have been discovered recently and besides the are a great development in pharmaceutical industry. So many diseases can be cured recently which could cause manty fatalities in past decades. New methods and equipment can save life of many people. For example, I remember that my niece had been born 2 months earlier and she was too tiny and also disable, she couldn’t even breath by herself. She stayed about 3 months in hospital and with help of developed equipment and drugs she could survive, while many newborns died at the early days of their life because of the lack of diagnosis, drugs and equipment. this taught that me how the progression in medical science was vital to all of us.
Second, life has been easier, faster and also safer than what it was in past. Advanced in producing new cars, equipment and any other safe and handy material have provided a safer life for us. For example, new cars are much safer than old ones. New cars have equipment such as airbags that have saved the life of many humans in sever accidents I had a very severe accident last summer and I survived it just because of the air bags in my car. Technology saved my life and I am sure that people in past decades was deprived from such useful inventions. Because of new advanced products such as facilities in factories human don’t need to do so many dangerous and hard works. So many simple experiences in life of all of has shown that how safer and more comfortable we are nowadays.
In sum, these days life span has become much longer than past. Progression in technology and also in medical science has not only saved many life but also provided easier life for us. We should all consider and appreciate the great efforts of scientists that bring us longer lifespan.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun scientist seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many scientists'.
Suggestion: Many scientists
...ne of most important issues these days. Many scientist has doing their best effort to provide ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun examination seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many examinations'.
Suggestion: Many examinations
...fort to provide longer lifespan for us. Many examination and researches have been done and resul...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
... giving us the chance of living longer. nowadays alt of researches has been done in orde...
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Message: Use simply 'Many'.
Suggestion: Many
...at cannot be diagnosed in past decades. Many different rare diseases have been discovered rece...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ve been discovered recently and besides the are a great development in pharmaceutical i...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...lack of diagnosis, drugs and equipment. this taught that me how the progression in m...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
... faster and also safer than what it was in past. Advanced in producing new cars, equipm...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...ble we are nowadays. In sum, these days life span has become much longer than p...
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...o in medical science has not only saved many life but also provided easier life for ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun life seems to be countable; consider using: 'many lives'.
Suggestion: many lives
...o in medical science has not only saved many life but also provided easier life for us. W...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, while, as to, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76715686275 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44899919927 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9960045611 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.619047619 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0570102470643 0.236089414692 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0200719401659 0.076458572812 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232108885602 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0382386899963 0.150856017488 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136077916528 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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