Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE 'Once you decide where it is you wa...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 529, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...easingly diligent manner and have never gave up. Whenever I set a goal in my life, I...
^^^^
Line 7, column 682, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ible way. This has led to my success in many different aspects of life, both in personal and p...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 425, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... process of construction of a building. Also I learned a lot about the different asp...
^^^^
Line 11, column 745, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...n designing and constructing buildings. Also I was participated in designing and con...
^^^^
Line 13, column 112, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
...ntage of solar energy, in order to help reducing global pollution by consuming clean and...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 251, Rule ID: EAGER_TO[1]
Message: With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...is area. Moreover, I am really eager to become a specialist in energy topics and I wou...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, really, so, thus, well, as a matter of fact
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 13.8261648746 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 94.0 43.0788530466 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 132.0 52.1666666667 253% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4037.0 1977.66487455 204% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 792.0 407.700716846 194% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09722222222 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.30495000532 4.48103885553 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19513781552 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 365.0 212.727598566 172% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460858585859 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1286.1 618.680645161 208% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1338216834 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.518518519 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03703703704 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 193.0 86.8835125448 222% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job! What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100 Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
--------------------- Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE 'Once you decide where it is you wa...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 529, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...easingly diligent manner and have never gave up. Whenever I set a goal in my life, I...
^^^^
Line 7, column 682, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ible way. This has led to my success in many different aspects of life, both in personal and p...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 425, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... process of construction of a building. Also I learned a lot about the different asp...
^^^^
Line 11, column 745, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...n designing and constructing buildings. Also I was participated in designing and con...
^^^^
Line 13, column 112, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
...ntage of solar energy, in order to help reducing global pollution by consuming clean and...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 251, Rule ID: EAGER_TO[1]
Message: With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...is area. Moreover, I am really eager to become a specialist in energy topics and I wou...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, really, so, thus, well, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 13.8261648746 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 94.0 43.0788530466 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 132.0 52.1666666667 253% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4037.0 1977.66487455 204% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 792.0 407.700716846 194% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09722222222 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.30495000532 4.48103885553 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19513781552 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 365.0 212.727598566 172% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460858585859 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1286.1 618.680645161 208% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1338216834 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.518518519 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03703703704 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 193.0 86.8835125448 222% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.