Elephants behavior's beliefs in people.
The reading and the lecture are both about elephants. They are the largest land animals in modern world. The author of reading believes that elephants have some surprising behaviors. These behaviors are beliefs of people. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article. He says that there is misunderstanding on elephant's behavior.
First of all, the author claims that elephants are aware of their death. So, when they become older they go alone at certain location. They often found near the water, and that is called elephant’ graveyards’. This point is challenged by the lecturer. She says that when they become older, their teeth become weak, so they try to find soft food. Soft food is easy to chew for them. Elephants go near water because soft food is available near water area. After some time when they find their food, they die over there.
Secondly, the author states that elephants represent objects through the art. He mentions that elephants can teach to hold paintbrush in the trunk and use it to paint canvas. The lecturer rebuts this argument. He says that they trained to remember some brush stroke by artist.He elaborates on this by mentioning that their ears are sensitive, so they trained by touch on their ear to teach certain patterns of the stokes.
Thirdly, the author mentions that elephants afraid from the mice. Author believes that they stay away from mice and left area where mice are present. The lecture, on the other hand, states that if elephants are unfamiliar with animals then they try to avoid them. He puts the forth that elephants who are from zoo they never afraid from mice. So, once they become known to the mice then they never pose a threat.
In conclusion, the lecturer effectively casts doubt on all of the beliefs presented in the reading.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ind their food, they die over there. Secondly, the author states that elephan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 22.412803532 205% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 309.0 270.72406181 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91909385113 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45467069001 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 145.348785872 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508090614887 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 13.0662251656 184% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2666184231 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3333333333 110.228320801 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.875 21.698381199 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06452816374 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165000450432 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640708462719 0.0996497079465 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109277042909 0.0662205650399 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109581039257 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891459131812 0.0443174109184 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.3589403974 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 53.8541721854 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.0289183223 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.7273730684 37% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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