Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things related to schoolwork.
In modern era, it is worldwide problem that parents could not give their time to the children, because they are busy to earn more money for their children. Although, plethora of people believe that children should do homework or others have the opposite view. Generally, I believe that it is better to utilize that time by playing the games or sports when parents do not able to give their time to children. I feel this way because of few reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, children can divert their mind if they choose to play games or sports. Since childhood is very vulnerable age, children could not handle the loneliness. They would be get upset if their parents cannot pay attention to them. Games are best way to divert their mind. There are many benefits to play it like it increased their concentration and enhance their skills. For example, when I was in school, my parents were working. When I got free I like to play cooking game . Now, I am good in cooking, because from childhood I fond of to cook.
Hence, in addition to divert the mind, they can refresh themselves which will help them to come out from their hectic schedule. Children has already too much school work to do so they can rarely get chance to play games or sports, so it can refresh themselves. However, if students do work which is r their school, then they would not get fresh. Instead of being fresh they will be more upset.
Thirdly, sports are good for their health .Although, children has much study works it is inevitable for them to do exercise. Hence, they could not get chance to do this. By playing sports they can do exercise as well as feel happy to do something which is different from everyday. For example, outdoor sports like cricket, badminton and other games are very exciting.
By the way of conclusion, in all concerned which mentioned above, it is best option for children to give their time in games and sports. This is because it helps them to increase concentration, develop good skills and refresh their mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for example, i feel, in addition, as well as, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67493112948 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38171919886 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482093663912 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8610737285 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1363636364 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295225784061 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933643437345 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090842167333 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180538827527 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101102429956 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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