do you agree or disagree that it is important to know about surrounding events whether it is not affected to your routine life.
In today's life it is inevitable to be aware of events taking place in parts of the world. Nowadays, people are touch in with television, newspaper and internet, so it is easy to get information about surrounding events. Although, some people think that it is not as much important to know about surrounding world, whereas some believe that it is essential to know about current affairs. Personally, i believe that it is essential to know about incidents which happen in world.
First of all, in modern era, criminal crisis are increasing day by day. It is important to be aware of this crisis. For instance, in some area of the Gujarat stealing activities are growing since 3 years. Some unknown group of thieves is responsible for this. They steal the golden ornaments from empty home, so this is big alert for people of their are that do not keep much ornaments in home.Therefore, if people are aware of this events, then they do not have to face this problem.
Secondly, media plays an important role to give information to people. technology is being advanced in modern life. It is necessary to know about advance technology. For example, robotic is best advancement in recent era. Robots can work in companies, hospital, stores in place of human. People can also use it in their personal life, like robotic vacuum cleaner, which is useful in home. Thus, it is really helpful to have knowledge about surrounding things. People also get experienced by being aware of recent technology. They can know about its pros and cons through media or from other people. So, the knowledge about surrounding events is beneficial for people.
Finally, people can get information about other countries. For example, nowadays, abroad education craze is potent in youngsters. If youngsters keep knowledge about foreign country’s rules and system, then it will be useful for them in their further study.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is important to know about surrounding events. This is because it helps to the people in their routine life as well as in future life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96848137536 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73007717863 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489971346705 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6652791772 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5416666667 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226106670827 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700177354122 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664181443724 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1476820232 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917678734041 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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