Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The debates on what is the best method that parents should do during their free time with their children has garnered a range of views. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of elements should <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D62F1CB6827726B2A8D638BB08395404" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be taken" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">be</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D62F1CB6827726B2A8D638BB08395404" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be taken" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> taken</pwa> into consideration to check the constructive and destructive of this issue. Some people posit that parents should have fun and play with their kids during their break time. However, some others take the opposite side and disagree. From my vantage point, I agree with the former group. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-DED647F077F6763B03A0E03D944C2DDE" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be considered" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">be</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-DED647F077F6763B03A0E03D944C2DDE" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be considered" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> considered</pwa> is that creating beautiful and unforgettable memories. In a narrow condition, according to educational psychology researchers, young people always remember the amusing moments with their parents. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in elementary school, my father used to take me to the zoo in his free time. However, I could not forget this part of my childhood because it was enjoyable and exciting. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-BF5319BF2D0CED8A906B877ECA408376" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_248" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: A" data-pwa-suggestions="A" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="All in all, a" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">All in all, a</pwa> child cannot forget the fun moment with his/her parents.
Second, another reason which deserves some words to say is that playing with kids is a central component of their development. To be specific, when parents play games or sports with their children, they equip kids with many skills and tools. For example, playing will develop their communication skills and improve their physical skills. Some of these skills play a pivotal role in the child's personality. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-AB18205E37F7BF640C08E48D220B9AC6" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: By" data-pwa-suggestions="By" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Furthermore, by" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Furthermore, by</pwa> giving the child a pleasure moment, his/her confidence and self-esteem will increase noticeably. A vivid example that can shed light on this subject is one from my experience. When I was a child, my mother used to play with me with Lego. Fortunately, this part of my life has positive significant impacts on my intellectual level and my personality.
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-82018A02C06C53604ED473BC6097EF48" data-pwa-rule-id="CRFSR_TO_10" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="Two" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="To" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">To</pwa> wraps it up in the light of <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-7C51D53480CE85AA374296BF5EB27344" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3107" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: above" data-pwa-suggestions="above" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="above-mentioned" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">above-mentioned</pwa> reasons. I strongly believe that parents should spend their time with their children playing and having fun.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 898, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their children playing and having fun.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4747.0 1977.66487455 240% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 492.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 9.64837398374 4.8611393121 198% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.9674456728 2.67179642975 448% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493902439024 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1288.8 618.680645161 208% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.6 1.51630824373 171% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 178.685622743 48.9658058833 365% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.576923077 100.406767564 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.65384615385 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0472213194084 0.236089414692 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724358026788 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111605001673 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461371948165 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226990634978 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.5 11.7677419355 285% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -31.39 58.1214874552 -54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.1 10.1575268817 218% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 38.69 10.9000537634 355% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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