The emperor Claudius of Rome ruled an empire spanning three continents between 41 and 54 CE. His reign was of massive importance to the history of ancient European civilization. In fact, the emperor was among the most innovative, fair, and wise in all Rom

The emperor Claudius of Rome is often portrayed as a viscious fool traditionally, but the passage argues this is because of his disagreements with the ancient authors, and further gives points to say he was one of the most important, innovative and wise emperors. The professor disagrees with the passage with some more points.

The professor says that eventhough some of his actions were innovative, the most innovative thing was how he came to power by paying off the military after the assassinatino of the previous emperor. Other who followed this trend later on ultimately led Rome into the Civil War. The professor says this can never be a trait of a good president.

The professor acknowledges that the emperor is considered to have strong judgement for some of his works, like expanding roman citizenship to new people, but points out that many of his actions were simply terrible and showed bad judgement. He gives examples of such actions, like conquering Britain just to win prestige, and encouraging violent gladiotor game where several died just to entertain the people of Rome. He says that the emperor wouldnt listen to both sides for taking decisions.

Th professor also criticises the emperor's actions that make him seem unwise. Eventhough it may seem wise to give opportunities to slaves and women and entrust them with high beaeaucratic positions, the professor points out that those slaves were mostly known for being corruupt, and had huge personal earnings in the cost of the city. The emperor's wives were also disloyal and his last wife even poisoned him. The professor finally argues that the Nero was a bad choice as the successor for the throne.

All these show the emperor's not-so-wise nature and cast doubt on the points made by the passage.

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Average: 8.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...eople of Rome. He says that the emperor wouldnt listen to both sides for taking decisio...
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Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'wive'.
Suggestion: wive
...s in the cost of the city. The emperors wives were also disloyal and his last wife ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 296.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02027027027 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67221828222 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 145.348785872 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584459459459 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1818130465 49.2860985944 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 7.06452816374 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178635428408 0.272083759551 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635819008467 0.0996497079465 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532015592515 0.0662205650399 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106002057518 0.162205337803 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238371179275 0.0443174109184 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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