It is no doubt that we live in a digitally connected world, technology has been making itself apparent in every sphere of life. With so much exposure to technology, there are debates as to whether children should be given their own smarrtphones with internet access. I believe they shouldnt be forbidded from owning a smartphone and below are my views on three different aspects of this issue.
In this generation, in most of the housholds, both the parents are working. In such situation, it becomes really difficult to take care of kids and keep in touch with them. For instance, if both parents return home after 7pm, whereas the children return from school by 4pm. In the last few hours of their work, the parents cant help but be worried about whether the child has safely returned, whether he has had his/her lunch after reaching home, and so on. Owning a phone solves this and gives a sense of security and assurance. Access to today's technology makes connects the whole family like never possible before.
Human mind has an innate tendancy towards taboo or forbidden things. Many parents believe that exposure to such technologies at such young age would lead to addiction, and as a result forbid their kids from using them. I believe this just makes it worse because when they finally get to use it, they would be overwhelmed and get lost into their devices. This defeats the purpose of restricting the use at young age in the first place. Instead, parents should trust their children with independace so that they can learn and develop themselves the most.
Technology has advanced in all the field just to make mankind's life easier. This applies to mobile phones and internet too. As with all things, it depends on the user to use it for the good or the bad. So, parents should teach their kids from an young age on proper use of such technologies. Imagine, if a child who has been restricted from internet for most part of his life finally gets to use it. Without proper guidance, he will fall prey to imporper usage and that will do more harm than good. Suppose he was exposed to free use of technology right from a very young age and was properly guided, then he would know how to make good use of it and will make the most out of it.
In this age of technology, it is wise to accustom children with proper use of technology right from an young age so they know better of it and use it for they best.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, really, so, then, whereas, as to, for instance, no doubt, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57931034483 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35765479539 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9412085964 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5454545455 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7727272727 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21746091411 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664682475907 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478444005236 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13502118044 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213986837002 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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