European silver coins

Essay topics:

European silver coins

The reading and the lecture are both about the European silver coin. The author of the reading feels that there are three reasons the archeologists believe that coin is not a piece of historical evidence. The lecturer challenges the claims made by the author. She is of opinion that the archaeologists think that coin is not fake and Norse people contacted the American people.
First, the author argues that there is a great distance from settlements. The article mentions that coins found in Maine state and Norse people lived in North America that near eastern Canada and there is no connection between these two places. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. She claims that it is true there is a great distance, but the coin is not the only object that is found far. Additionally, she says that there is a reason behind that which is Americans travel to a far distance and bring coin with them.
Secondly, the writer suggests that no other coin is found. In the article, it is said that no other coin was found and it means that Norse people did not bring coin with them to their North American settlements. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that it is not necessarily they didn't bring silver coin with them, but they took it back to Europe. She elaborates on this by bringing up the point that Norse people brought silver coin when they came to North America and then they took it back again when they went back to Europe.
Finally, the author posits that there is no use of European coins. Moreover, the article stated that the Americans did not use the silver coins because the Americans found them useless. In contrast, the lecturer's position is that the coins might not have value today as to how was valuable in Europe, but they are interesting. She notes that American found coins interesting, and attractive that is why coins used in trade.
In conclusion, the lecturer's opinion is opposing the author's opinion.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... is not a piece of historical evidence. The lecturer challenges the claims made by ...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...tioning that it is not necessarily they didnt bring silver coin with them, but they t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lecturers'' or 'lecturer's'?
Suggestion: lecturers'; lecturer's
...oins used in trade. In conclusion, the lecturers opinion is opposing the authors opinion...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
..., the lecturers opinion is opposing the authors opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.4613686534 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 12.0772626932 199% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 22.412803532 210% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 340.0 270.72406181 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76176470588 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43968593758 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455882352941 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6149109029 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9444444444 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353053567694 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118970535067 0.0996497079465 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115529207732 0.0662205650399 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191836978986 0.162205337803 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120434791534 0.0443174109184 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.3589403974 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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