Turtle excluding device TED
The reading and the lecture are both about turtle excluding device ted. The author feels that TEDs have been criticized for several reasons. The lecturer challenges the claims made by author. he is of opinion that many expert believe that TEDs are good way to save endangered turtle and they are vital parts of equipment of shrimp boat.
First, the author argues that turtles get trapped only rarely. The article mentions that it is estimated one turtle each month get trapped, however, using TEDs cost the shrimpers to lose some percentage of shrimps to escape through turtle passages so the lost of shrimps is high in comparison to lose turtle. this specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. he claims that it is true that rarely turtle get trapped by TEDs. Additionally he says that there is a lot of shrimps and shrimpers in united stated and if any shrimper got turtle there will be a big loss in decline in turtle population and this is a big problem and we need to think about turtle population not the individual shrimper.
Secondly, the writer suggests that there are other methods to protect turtles than using TEDs. In the article, it is said that by shortening time limit of shrimp boats that keep the nets underwater and pull the net when time limit reach to allow the caught turtle to get air and allow the shrimper to release the turtle from the nets. The lecturer, however, rebut this by mentioning that time limit is good idea, but only in theory. he elaborate this by bringing up the point that time can not be manage and inforce and the government can not manage how long the shrimpers use the boats and TEDs is good to control time all need to do is just make sure before boat leave from port that TEDs is found.
Finally, the author posits that TEDs are not effective for larger species of endangered sea turtles. Moreover, the article stated that some species like loggerhead and leatherback turtles can grow to be quite large and cannot fit through the escape passage that standard TEDs provide. In contrast, the lecturer position is that it is true some TEDs are small for large turtle. he notes that the size of TEDs can be modify and make a big one that can be used for a big turtles so custom size of TEDs are used for each area depending on size of turtle in that area.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ve been criticized for several reasons. The lecturer challenges the claims made by ...
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...r challenges the claims made by author. he is of opinion that many expert believe ...
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...or argues that turtles get trapped only rarely. The article mentions that it is estima...
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... turtle each month get trapped, however, using TEDs cost the shrimpers to lose s...
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... each month get trapped, however, using TEDs cost the shrimpers to lose some per...
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...s is high in comparison to lose turtle. this specific argument is challenged by the ...
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...argument is challenged by the lecturer. he claims that it is true that rarely turt...
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...that rarely turtle get trapped by TEDs. Additionally he says that there is a lot of shrimps ...
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...f shrimps and shrimpers in united stated and if any shrimper got turtle there wil...
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...limit is good idea, but only in theory. he elaborate this by bringing up the point...
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...rtles. Moreover, the article stated that some species like loggerhead and leather...
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...e some TEDs are small for large turtle. he notes that the size of TEDs can be modi...
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...ke a big one that can be used for a big turtles so custom size of TEDs are used for ea...
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... turtles so custom size of TEDs are used for each area depending on size of turtl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in contrast, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 10.4613686534 258% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 22.0 12.0772626932 182% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1373.03311258 138% => OK
No of words: 415.0 270.72406181 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56144578313 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26595214432 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 145.348785872 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467469879518 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 419.366225166 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.7324238248 49.2860985944 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.2 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 21.698381199 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36466008669 0.272083759551 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125865575652 0.0996497079465 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132758270539 0.0662205650399 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228468795223 0.162205337803 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919608075117 0.0443174109184 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.3589403974 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.2367328918 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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