Turtle Excluder Devices
The topic of both the lecture as well as the passage are Turtle Excluder Devices (TED), which are designed in order to decrease the number of accidental deaths among sea turtles. The author of the article strongly believes this is a great invention. The lecturer, however, thinks that the idea is far from perfect, and firmly believes there is need for improvement.
First of all, the author claims that the TED mechanism is a good way to specifically help turtles in need. According to the writer of the passage, animals smaller than ten centimeters will pass through the metal guard. The lecturer doubts this idea. Even though most turtles are larger than ten centimeters, there are still small to mid-sized turtles who will not get caught by the metal guard. As a result, those smaller turtles will still end up in the trawl.
Secondly, the author mentions the ‘Shrimp-Turtle Law’, which is a law that explicitly states that all shrimping boats should have a TED installed. Even though this idea might sound appealing, the lecturer is doubtful about the implementation of this law. The TED could potentially lead to shrimp catch loss, so some fishermen will not want to use TED. On the wide open sea, some boats might simply remove the TED when they are out of sight. In other words, this law is extremely difficult to monitor.
Lastly, the author briefly discusses import regulations. According to the writer, all products containing shrimps must come from certified users of TEDs. The lecturer disputes this point of view by stating that there are a lot of fake documents and certifications, which could easily turn every fisherman into a certified TED user. It is hard to distinguish a real certification from a fake one. Moreover, the professor states that are a lot of differences with regard to regulations on an international scale. Therefore, she thinks this policy is very difficult to implement in practice.
In conclusion, both the writer and the professor have conflicting views about the implementation of the Turtle Excluder Devices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
The topic of both the lecture as well as the passage are Turtle Excluder Devices...
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Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gly believes this is a great invention. The lecturer, however, thinks that the idea...
^^^
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntation of the Turtle Excluder Devices.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, in other words, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1373.03311258 125% => OK
No of words: 342.0 270.72406181 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02046783626 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8029713162 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 145.348785872 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56432748538 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.133657841 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3684210526 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.31578947368 7.06452816374 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184573285558 0.272083759551 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489822920499 0.0996497079465 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084216546966 0.0662205650399 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117717726907 0.162205337803 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872351055244 0.0443174109184 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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