Voynich manuscript
The reading and the lecture are both about voynich manuscript. The author feels that there are several theories have been proposed to explain the origin of the voynich manuscript ,because it is completely unknown. The lecturer challenges the claims made by author. he feels that none of the three people mentioned in reading is possibly the author of voynich manuscript.
First, the author argues that manuscript is a genuine work on some scientific or magical objects composed in a complex secret codes. The article mentions that anthony who is a physician and botanist, has been identified as possible author ,because many plants that mentioned in voynich manuscript are same to anthony's book on medicinal plants A little herbals that was published in 1550. this specific argument is challenged by the lecture. he claims that who ever wrote the manuscript is trying to convey information that are so important and powerful that is why they special secret code used and this not fit anthony who was an ordinary physician and scientist and his book not have the original ideas. Additionally, he says that the example of little herbal book which has the description of common plants depend on well known sources it seems unlikely to be the author.
Secondly, the writer suggests that manuscript is really fake and its text has no real meaning. In the article it is said that it has been proposed that kelly a person who extracted money from nobles across the Europe by pretending to have magical powers.he used a made-up alphabet in a completely random order.The lecturer , however, rebuts this by mentioning that kelly is good when he tricks people ,but it is unlikely to make fake manuscript to sell it to wealthy people. he elaborates on this by bringing up the point that the creater took care of this manuscript to make it like real and if he wants to get money it is un necessary to make it complex he just can do it in simple ways as he used to do in his books.
Finally, the author posits that manuscript is actually a modern fake created by Wilfrid M . voynich himself. Moreover, it is stated in the article that . As an antique book dealer, voynich certainly had the knowledge of what old manuscripts should look like and could have created a fake one. Perhaps voynich's plan was to sell the fake as a mysterious old book if he received an attractive offer. In contrast, the lecturer position is that this manuscript was able to be dated by using modern methods of vellum and ink. he notes that if author used vellum pages nowadays he can not use the ink which used 400 years ago so the manuscript done before voynich obtained.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ain the origin of the voynich manuscript ,because it is completely unknown. The le...
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...ript ,because it is completely unknown. The lecturer challenges the claims made by ...
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...r challenges the claims made by author. he feels that none of the three people men...
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...al objects composed in a complex secret codes. The article mentions that anthony who ...
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..., has been identified as possible author ,because many plants that mentioned in vo...
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...honys book on medicinal plants A little herbals that was published in 1550. this specif...
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...tle herbals that was published in 1550. this specific argument is challenged by the ...
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... argument is challenged by the lecture. he claims that who ever wrote the manuscri...
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...p alphabet in a completely random order.The lecturer , however, rebuts this by ment...
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...n a completely random order.The lecturer , however, rebuts this by mentioning that...
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...that kelly is good when he tricks people ,but it is unlikely to make fake manuscri...
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...anuscript to sell it to wealthy people. he elaborates on this by bringing up the p...
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...ually a modern fake created by Wilfrid M . voynich himself. Moreover, it is stated...
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...ly a modern fake created by Wilfrid M . voynich himself. Moreover, it is stated in the ...
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...reover, it is stated in the article that . As an antique book dealer, voynich cert...
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...using modern methods of vellum and ink. he notes that if author used vellum pages ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 10.4613686534 268% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 12.0772626932 215% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 22.412803532 236% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 1373.03311258 159% => OK
No of words: 459.0 270.72406181 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74727668845 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56735232325 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 145.348785872 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483660130719 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 419.366225166 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.1895177871 49.2860985944 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.055555556 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 4.19205298013 382% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36325419426 0.272083759551 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146469235387 0.0996497079465 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124859275951 0.0662205650399 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260731020748 0.162205337803 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128243515299 0.0443174109184 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 63.6247240618 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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