Eco certification

Essay topics:

Eco-certification

The reading and lecture are both about eco-certification. The author of reading feels that there are some reasons that United States wood companies do not do eco-certification for their products in their companies by conserving products and recycling materials. The lecturer challenges the claims made by author. He is of opinion that despite what people say about eco-certified wood companies there are some good reasons for the people to seek eco-certification.
First, the author argues that American consumer are exposed to a lot of advertising so they will not pay attention or see the value of it.The article mentions that there are many mediocre products are labels as new or improved, American people do not trust the advertising in general. this specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that consumer in United States can distinguish between really beneficial advertising and the unreal ones. Additionally, he says that the eco-certified wood companies and products will be favourable to them if it is trust worthy.
Secondly, the writer suggests that eco-certified wood will be expensive. In the article, it is said that wood companies pay money to get their products certified by a certification agency. this extra money will passed to consumer on the other hand, the American people get motivated by money, and hence they choose the uncertified products. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that it is right that American consumer care a lot about prise, but the decision for prise is only if one products is differ a lot in prise than other. He elaborates on this by bringing up the point that if the difference in the prise is only less than a five percent then American consumer will choose the eco-factor.
Finally, the author posits that people in United States always follow the development, but this is not convincing. Moreover, the article stated that doing eco-certified products in United States wood company would work only if these products aboard and this is not happening, because most of Unites States products is for American people. In contrast, the lecturer's position is that united states companies pay attention to the wood products internationally it is not about consumer but about competition. He notes that american people are interested in eco-certified products, and if united stated less aware of that the other foreign companies will produce these eco-certified products that american companies do not.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rving products and recycling materials. The lecturer challenges the claims made by ...
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Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ot pay attention or see the value of it.The article mentions that there are many me...
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Line 2, column 285, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...o not trust the advertising in general. this specific argument is challenged by the ...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ts certified by a certification agency. this extra money will passed to consumer on ...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'pass'
Suggestion: pass
...ification agency. this extra money will passed to consumer on the other hand, the Amer...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one product', 'a product', or simply 'products'?
Suggestion: one product; a product; products
..., but the decision for prise is only if one products is differ a lot in prise than other. He...
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Line 3, column 508, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
...on for prise is only if one products is differ a lot in prise than other. He elaborate...
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Line 3, column 615, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... up the point that if the difference in the prise is only less than a five percent then A...
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Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... eco-certified products in United States wood company would work only if these pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, in contrast, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 22.412803532 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1373.03311258 151% => OK
No of words: 397.0 270.72406181 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23929471033 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0025379101 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430730478589 0.540411800872 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 419.366225166 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.791120328 49.2860985944 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.352941176 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3529411765 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06452816374 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186882601741 0.272083759551 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720062141379 0.0996497079465 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736741500588 0.0662205650399 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132768958612 0.162205337803 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834751807578 0.0443174109184 188% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.8541721854 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 63.6247240618 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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