Humans have long been fascinated by elephants the largest land animal in the modern world Social animals that live in herds elephants are native to both Africa and Asia Their large ears long trunk and long life span have made elephants one of the most cap

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Humans have long been fascinated by elephants, the largest land animal in the modern world. Social animals that live in herds, elephants are native to both Africa and Asia. Their large ears, long trunk, and long life span have made elephants one of the most captivating creatures on Earth. Our long-standing interest in elephants has led to several beliefs about surprising elephant behaviors.

Both the author of the article and the lecturer's statements revolve around the beliefs about the elephants. Regrarging the passage, The author profoundly believes there are three plausible hypothesis which all together attest that this creature have some spesific abilities. How ever the professor calls all the mentioned claims into question since they lack enough evidence to be considered credible. In fact, The professor believes all these claims are somehow wrong and addresses, in detail, the trouble with each point made in the reading text.
First and foremost, The author of the reading states that the elelphants are aware of their death time so they go to certain places alled elephants graveyards to die alone. The professor repudiates this fallacious belife by reffering to more strong evidence. According to the lecturer, because when they get older their teeth wil become hardly to use, eventually they have to eat softer vegies; thereby, they go to the areas close to water. So this hypothesis is excluded and it is not convincing.
Another hypothesis, presented by the essayist, hold the idea that elephants are only spicies after human that have the capability to represent the objects throught painting with paint brushes, while it is not addequate to prove that elephants have artisitic spirit. Nevertheless, the orator expilicitly addresses this point when she states that elephants painting is dependend on their masters. She elaboreate on this by bringing up the point that the will learn to move the brush when ever someone strock they ears, and by repeating this act, because their ears are so sensitive, they will draw a picture of an object. Thus the secound claim is also ruled as the result of more decisive fact which is offered by the professor.
Finally, the author brings this argument to a close by suggesting that by a common belife, elepants are frightened from mice. While he actually ignores one crucial fact. These animals have this fear because they are not familiar to mice.Not surprisingly, The lecturer takes issue with this claim by contending that the zoo elephants are not afraid of mice because they got accustumed to seeing them nearby. She notes that in the wild nature, these to kinds are not usually live close to eachother so they elephants not get used to mice presence.Consequently, this hypothesis is also based on nowing reasons.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, finally, first, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 22.412803532 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1373.03311258 146% => OK
No of words: 391.0 270.72406181 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10997442455 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6881851574 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 145.348785872 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557544757033 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 419.366225166 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4866601386 49.2860985944 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.875 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 21.698381199 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129037828048 0.272083759551 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397156512792 0.0996497079465 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427816590053 0.0662205650399 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790244641467 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348500546663 0.0443174109184 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 63.6247240618 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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