It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
There is a saying in ancient time "old is gold". I personally, believe that it is more valuable to keep our old friends rather then making new friends. I feel this way for two main reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, old friends will know and understand us far more better than the new friends, which makes us feel more safe and supportive. I have a friend who was staying a few miles away from my apartment. I have known her more than 15 years. She knowns all my secret, weakness and my strenght, same as i do of he. But after high school i move down town to a new place and there i met a girl name Su. She was kind soul person. However, one day while coming back from class i notice a group of boys was following me. I immedaitely dial her number, i was in shock and couldnt think of dailing police number. The respond she gave was sorry i am busy in the party with others. So if i would not met her i will never know how precious old friends are i always get back.
Secondly, sharing secrets of each other is the most valuble things in the friendship because people can't keep others secret for a longer period of time. It determines how faithful and trustworthy you are as person. My friend experiences is a compelling example of this. It was about a year ago, when she joined a new company. She was the only girl from her village working in that company. Her college classmate was working there too. After few months she became too close with her that they used to share about their work, and everything. They even knows each others password of desktop. One fine day, when there was a promotion presentation for the best employee, her new friend stab a knife behind her, stealing all her datas for the presentation. She even spread all her secrets to all the employees. At last, my friend lost her job and she went into depression for a year. This example illastrates that we cannot trust new friend even though they seem to be very kind from outside.
In the conclusion, i strongly believe that old friends are precious than new one. This is because we always have their back when in trouble, and because
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...valuable to keep our old friends rather then making new friends. I feel this way for...
^^^^
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...el this way for two main reasons, which i will explore in the following essay. ...
^
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...friends will know and understand us far more better than the new friends, which makes us fe...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...cret, weakness and my strenght, same as i do of he. But after high school i move ...
^
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...me as i do of he. But after high school i move down town to a new place and there...
^
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...move down town to a new place and there i met a girl name Su. She was kind soul p...
^
Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r, one day while coming back from class i notice a group of boys was following me...
^
Line 3, column 549, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...wing me. I immedaitely dial her number, i was in shock and couldnt think of daili...
^
Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ely dial her number, i was in shock and couldnt think of dailing police number. The res...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...couldnt think of dailing police number. The respond she gave was sorry i am busy in the par...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 639, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... number. The respond she gave was sorry i am busy in the party with others. So if...
^
Line 3, column 675, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rry i am busy in the party with others. So if i would not met her i will never know h...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 681, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...am busy in the party with others. So if i would not met her i will never know how...
^
Line 3, column 693, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'meet'
Suggestion: meet
...he party with others. So if i would not met her i will never know how precious old ...
^^^
Line 3, column 701, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... with others. So if i would not met her i will never know how precious old friend...
^
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...things in the friendship because people cant keep others secret for a longer period ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...le cant keep others secret for a longer period of time. It determines how faithful and trustwo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...t their work, and everything. They even knows each others password of desktop. One fi...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...k, and everything. They even knows each others password of desktop. One fine day, when...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, as for, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 22.412803532 290% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1373.03311258 129% => OK
No of words: 400.0 270.72406181 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4125 5.08290768461 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36959780343 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 145.348785872 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5475 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 3.25607064018 614% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 13.0662251656 199% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7060509783 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8846153846 110.228320801 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 7.06452816374 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 4.19205298013 453% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271890235587 0.272083759551 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780005512757 0.0996497079465 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111121428166 0.0662205650399 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199684928258 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532999193153 0.0443174109184 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.3589403974 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 53.8541721854 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.0289183223 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 12.2367328918 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.42419426049 77% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.2008830022 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.