Many scientists believe it would be possible to maintain a permanent human presence on Mars or the Moon. On the other hand, conditions on Venus are so extreme and inhospitable that maintaining a human presence there would be impossible.First, atmospheric
The reading and the lecture are both about the possibilty of success of any attempt for human presence on Venus. The author of the reading feels that Venus's atmosphere is too extreme for a human to survive in spite of usinng any techlogy.
The lecturer challenges the claim made by the author. He is of the opinion that a floating station like ballon can eliminate each of the difficulties associated with Venus's atmosphere.
To begin with, the author argues that atmospheric pressure of venus is 90 time that of earth. The article mentions it is like 100 kg pressure per square meter and humen as well as space crafts are likely to be crushed by this pressure.
This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He describes that if the station is situated 50 KM higher in the atmosphere, the pressure is likely to be low there. Additionally, he reasons as the pressure there would be less extreme,
human won't crush there.
Secondly, the writer suggests that there is no reserved source of water in Venus. In the article, it is stated that there are only extreme elements like carbondioxider and sulfuric acid, so water and oxigens must be carried from earth.
The lecturer, however, refutes this by mentioning that clemical reaction of carbondioxider and sulfuric acid can be performed in the labs to produce oxigens and waters. He elaborates on this by bringing up the point that as there
are abundant amount of carbondioxider and sulfuric acid in the Venus's atmosphere, it will provide enough oxigen and water. So, carrying them from earth would not be necessary.
Finally, the author posits that sunlight doesn't reach Venus's surface. Moreover, in the article, it is said that electricity needed to power the machines would not there to produce. In contrast, the lecturer's position is that if the station
is 50 KM high up the ground, it can get sunlight as it would above the cloud. He notes as the cloud refelcts sunlight too, stations will get sunligh both from above and bottom. So, power would not be an issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...vive in spite of usinng any techlogy. The lecturer challenges the claim made by t...
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...he pressure there would be less extreme, human wont crush there. Secondly, the...
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...s by bringing up the point that as there are abundant amount of carbondioxider an...
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... the point that as there are abundant amount of carbondioxider and sulfuric acid in ...
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...inally, the author posits that sunlight doesnt reach Venuss surface. Moreover, in the ...
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...oud refelcts sunlight too, stations will get sunligh both from above and bottom. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in contrast, as well as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.4613686534 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 348.0 270.72406181 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86494252874 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63623859514 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505747126437 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9792867075 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1052631579 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 7.06452816374 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.09492273731 244% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189793648118 0.272083759551 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627905248139 0.0996497079465 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642034966784 0.0662205650399 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761124177426 0.162205337803 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407372077204 0.0443174109184 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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