The outermost layer of skin, the epidermis, produces a variety of growths in animal and bird species. Because dinosaurs were reptiles, and modern reptiles have scales and armor plates on their skin, it was long assumed that dinosaurs had the same type of skin coverings. However, dinosaurs had many traits that modern reptiles lack, and evidence gathered by paleontologists indicates that dinosaurs may have, in fact, possessed feathers like modern birds.
The reading and the lecture are about the argument that all dinosaurs possessed feathers or not. The author in the article provides three theories about the existence of feathers on the body of dinosaurs. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the article. His position is that all the gigantic creatures didn't had feathers and it is a false argument.
According to the reading, the ancestors of modern birds were dinosaurs. If modern birds have feathers, then it is plausible to claim that the previous generations would also be having the feathers. The article mentions that all of the birds in the world have wings, and therefore, it can be claimed from the fossil records that all of the dinosaurs possessed feathers as well. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that it can be proved that some of the theropods had wings, and therefore, it does not proves that all of the dinosaurs had feathers. Additionally, he points out that most of the dinosaurs didn't inherited from the theropods, so it would be feasible to think that not all dinosaurs had wings.
Secondly, the author suggests that fossils had verified that all of the dinosaurs possessed feathers. In the article, it is said that the fossils lucidly show how the feathers are stick to the bones. The lecturer, however, asserts that no other species had a significant evidence of feathers on them. He goes on to say that the species such as Searopods had no records of skin having feathers.
Finally, the author posits that the feathers were one of the most important need of the dinosaurs as they can utilize their feathers when there is extreme weather conditions such as cold. The author contends that, similar to the warm-blooded birds, dinosaurs would also have used the feathers to keep them warm. In contrast, the lecturer's stance is that dinosaurs used gigantothermy as their means of maintaining temperature. The temperature of the large dinosaurs would not change internally even if there is cold outside.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tion is that all the gigantic creatures didnt had feathers and it is a false argument...
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Suggestion: prove
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1373.03311258 122% => OK
No of words: 338.0 270.72406181 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9674556213 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6754609796 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 419.366225166 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1895302369 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2777777778 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06452816374 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182371330136 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605455101881 0.0996497079465 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042237742962 0.0662205650399 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108322858612 0.162205337803 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428831254534 0.0443174109184 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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