Power of information in society
In an overview, in this speech and reading discussed about some interesting research on the power of information and how it affects in the society or how political scientist use them for control people. Deliberately, the essential indications in the lecture cast doubt on the fundamental points in the reading.
First of all, the lecture states that it is not the alone education is not the solution to society's problems and almost highly educated thinkers are less open to the new information. However, this is contrasts the topic in reading that the asserts that the solution to most problems societies face is a higher level of political sophistication that come from more education.
Furthermore, about to delve to changes people's mind, the lecture declares that in the usually facts do not change minds or cure misinformation. Although, this is opposite with clues of the reading that clearly indicates the fact checking us effective in correcting misinformation.
Finally, the lecture explain the people often base their opinions on their beliefs compare with on facts. Hence, if people feel threatened, they will not listen to new information and don't accept truth .While, this challenges the content in the text that believes the people advocate their opinions on facts and they will seek the truth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'change'.
Suggestion: change
...tion. Furthermore, about to delve to changes peoples mind, the lecture declares that...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ot change minds or cure misinformation. Although, this is opposite with clues of the rea...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... they will not listen to new information and dont accept truth .While, this chall...
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Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...will not listen to new information and dont accept truth .While, this challenges th...
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Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o new information and dont accept truth .While, this challenges the content in th...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...new information and dont accept truth .While, this challenges the content in the tex...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n facts and they will seek the truth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 212.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21226415094 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84991162354 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3755403425 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.125 110.228320801 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 21.698381199 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164650032489 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571528888972 0.0996497079465 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809771712469 0.0662205650399 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890549277146 0.162205337803 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812890836644 0.0443174109184 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.3589403974 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.7273730684 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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