Question Summarise the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they case doubt on specific points made in the reading passage

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Question : Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they case doubt on specific points made in the reading passage

In the reading passage, the author feels that are three possible explanations for the spreading out of zebra mussel can not be stopped and that it poses a serious threat to freshwater fish populations in all of North America. However, finding all these implausible and questionable, the professor casts doubt on what is presented and states some evidence to de contrary.

To begin with, the writer suggests that the zebra mussel's invasion can be unstoppable. In contrast, the lecture rebuts this argument by saying that the zebra mussel are not able to spread in the manner that was showed in the reading passage. He is of the opinion that zebra mussel can not survive in salty water. As a result, he posits that this explanation is faulty.

Secondly, the author points out that zebra mussels might dominate the new habitat. This specific argument is challenged by the lecture. He argues that others fish and bird can change their habits and start to eat the zebra mussels. Hence, he believes that this population will not be dominant.

Finally, the reading states that zebra mussels can cause a decline in the overall fish population in habitats where they become dominant. But, the lecture rejects this by saying that the zebra mussels will no be able to decrease all the fish population, only the fish species that eat plankton.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...s by saying that the zebra mussels will no be able to decrease all the fish popula...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, in contrast, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 226.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93362831858 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50995745855 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9380751501 49.2860985944 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9166666667 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0928548821991 0.272083759551 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374027876695 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024445930967 0.0662205650399 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612532473144 0.162205337803 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011655524124 0.0443174109184 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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