The reading passage and lecture about bees which are a type of the insect. the author doubts the theory that is supported by discovery of old fossil that resemble bee nests, the structure have been found inside 200-million years old in the state of Arizona, he gives three arguments to explain his idea. The lecture casts doubt on claim made in article. She says these arguments are not convenience.
Firt, the author believe, the earliest preserved body of bee is 100- million years ago, half as old as the fossilized structures discovered by Arazona. This point challenged by lecturer, She claims, the bees were present before 200 million years but in order to be as afossil need presence of resin secreted by type of tree that is found before 100 million years, therefore, no fossils present before that time.
Second, the writer elaborates that, absence of flowring plants before 200 million years indicated the absence of the bee due to the fact that these bees feed on that plants. This arrgument reputts by professor. She mentions, the bees can feed on differents type of food rather than flowering plants especialy before the presence of flowering plants.
Finally, the author states, the fossilization structure found in Arazona lack some of finer details of bees' nests for example, chambers of the modren bee nests , that suggest the fissilized structure were made by other insects. In the other hand, the professor illustrates that, chemical composition of the nest
fossils found before 200 million years have the same chemical tcomposition of the nests find in these day, this support the idea that fossilized nests that found before 200 milion years for the bee'nests
The reading passage and lecture about bees which are a type of the insect. the author doubts the theory that is supported by discovery of old fossil that resemble bee nests, the structure have been found inside 200-million years old in the state of Arizona, he gives three arguments to explain his idea. The lecture casts doubt on claim made in article. She says these arguments are not convenience.
Firt, the author believe, the earliest preserved body of bee is 100- million years ago, half as old as the fossilized structures discovered by Arazona. This point challenged by lecturer, She claims, the bees were present before 200 million years but in order to be as afossil need presence of resin secreted by type of tree that is found before 100 million years, therefore, no fossils present before that time.
Second, the writer elaborates that, absence of flowring plants before 200 million years indicated the absence of the bee due to the fact that these bees feed on that plants. This arrgument reputts by professor. She mentions, the bees can feed on differents type of food rather than flowering plants especialy before the presence of flowering plants.
Finally, the author states, the fossilization structure found in Arazona lack some of finer details of bees' nests for example, chambers of the modren bee nests , that suggest the fissilized structure were made by other insects. In the other hand, the professor illustrates that, chemical composition of the nest
fossils found before 200 million years have the same chemical tcomposition of the nests find in these day, this support the idea that fossilized nests that found before 200 milion years for the bee'nests
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, second, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 279.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03584229391 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48636844841 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530465949821 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.310408532 49.2860985944 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.727272727 110.228320801 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06452816374 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.546632485427 0.272083759551 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191622754123 0.0996497079465 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171304002011 0.0662205650399 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29277232533 0.162205337803 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.193283568995 0.0443174109184 436% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.