The reading passage and the lecture are both talking about causes of extiniction of a huge type of marine mammal called Steller's sea cow which live in Steller. The reading passage caims several reasons for extiniction. However, the lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She contends, causes on extiniction are not clears. And all theories mentioned inn passage are not unconvincing.
First reason author states, cows my be overhunted by native siberian people. Seberian used cow'meat as a source of food. Change in ecosystems cause decrease in main sources of food. This statement is contradicted by professor. She mentions, each cow weight many tons. One or two of them can feed Seberian population more than one month. As a result, native people did not need to kill many of cow. Therefore, declination in cow population was not from native people hunting.
Other reason the writer asserts, sea cow extinicted due to ecosystems disturbances. He said , this change lead to decrease in kelp that used by cow as a food sources. The professor refutes this point. She state, if cow population decrease as a result of ecosystem disturbances, why there was no other animal affected by this change. For example, whales did not affected. This explain, ecosystem change had no impact on extiniction of sea cow.
Lastly, cow fur traders is an important reason beyond declination. The lecturer dis agrees with this oint. She mention, declination in cow population occurred before coming of traders bfrom Europ. In conclusion, this theory dose not work also.
The reading passage and the lecture are both talking about extinigushing of a huge type of marine mammal called Steller's sea cow which live in Steller. The reading passage caims several reasons for extiniction. However, the lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She contends, causes on nextiniction are not clears. And all theories mentioned inn passage are not unconvincing.
First reason author states, cows my be overhunted by native siberian people. SAberian used cow'meat as a source of foodChange in ecosystems cause decrease in main sources of food. This statement is contradicted by professor. She mentions, each cow weight many tons. One or two of them can feed Seberian population more than one month. As a result, native people did not need to kill many of cow. Therefore, declination in cow population was not from native people hunting.
Other reason the writer asserts, sea cow extinicted due to ecosystems disturbances. He said , this change lead to decrease in kelp that used by cow as a food sources. The professor refutes this point. She state, if cow population decrease as a result of ecosystem disturbances, why there was no other animal affected by this change. For example, whales did not affected. This explain, ecosystem change had no impact on extiniction of sea cow.
Lastly, cow fur traders is an important reason beyond declination. The lecturer dis agrees with this oint. She mention, declination in cow population occurred before coming of traders bfrom Europ. In conclusion, this theory dose not work also.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...igushing of a huge type of marine mammal called Stellers sea cow which live in St...
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...ead to decrease in kelp that used by cow as a food sources. The professor refutes...
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...n conclusion, this theory dose not work also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, talking about, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 252.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14682539683 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82096055126 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646825396825 0.540411800872 120% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 21.2450331126 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0663603808 49.2860985944 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.9545454545 110.228320801 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4545454545 21.698381199 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.68181818182 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34660150046 0.272083759551 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873918933676 0.0996497079465 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147056301073 0.0662205650399 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223805110886 0.162205337803 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.253688085041 0.0443174109184 572% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 53.8541721854 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.41 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.7273730684 47% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.498013245 61% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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