Reading:Toward the end of his life, the Chevalier de Seingalt (1725−1798) wrote a long memoir recounting hislife and adventures. The Chevalier was a somewhat controversial figure, but since he met many famouspeople, including kings and writers, his memo

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Reading:

Toward the end of his life, the Chevalier de Seingalt (1725−1798) wrote a long memoir recounting his

life and adventures. The Chevalier was a somewhat controversial figure, but since he met many famous

people, including kings and writers, his memoir has become a valuable historical source about European

society in the eighteenth century. However, some critics have raised doubts about the accuracy of the

memoir. They claim that the Chevalier distorted or invented many events in the memoir to make his life

seem more exciting and glamorous than it really was.

For example, in his memoir the Chevalier claims that while living in Switzerland, he was very wealthy, and

it is known that he spent a great deal of money there on parties and gambling. However, evidence has

recently surfaced that the Chevalier borrowed considerable sums of money from a Swiss merchant. Critics

thus argue that if the Chevalier had really been very rich, he would not have needed to borrow money.

Critics are also skeptical about the accuracy of the conversations that the Chevalier records in the memoir

between himself and the famous writer Voltaire. No one doubts that the Chevalier and Voltaire met and

conversed. However, critics complain that the memoir cannot possibly capture these conversations

accurately, because it was written many years after the conversations occurred. Critics point out that it is

impossible to remember exact phrases from extended conversations held many years earlier.

Critics have also questioned the memoir’s account of the Chevalier’s escape from a notorious prison in

Venice, Italy. He claims to have escaped the Venetian prison by using a piece of metal to make a hole in

the ceiling and climbing through the roof. Critics claim that while such a daring escape makes for enjoyable

reading, it is more likely that the Chevalier’s jailers were bribed to free him. They point out that the Chevalier

had a number of politically well-connected friends in Venice who could have offered a bribe.

Listening:

No memoir can possibly be correct in every

detail, but still, the Chevalier’s memoir

is pretty accurate overall and is, by and

large, a reliable historical source. Let’s look at the accuracy of the three episodes

mentioned in the reading.

First, the loan from the merchant: Well, that doesn’t mean that the Chevalier was

poor. Let me explain. We know that in Switzerland, the Chevalier spent huge

amounts of money on parties and on gambling. And he had wealth, but it was the

kind of property you have to sell first to get money. So it usually took a few days to

convert his assets into actual money. So when he ran out of cash, he had to borrow

some while he was waiting for his money to arrive—but that’s not being poor!

Second, the conversations with Voltaire: The Chevalier states in his memoir that

each night, immediately after conversing with Voltaire, he wrote down everything he

could remember about that particular night’s conversation. Evidently, the Chevalier

kept his notes of these conversations for many years and referred to them when

writing the memoir. Witnesses who lived with the Chevalier in his later life confirm

that he regularly consulted notes and journals when composing the memoir.

Third, the Chevalier’s escape from the prison in Venice: Other prisoners in that

prison had even more powerful friends than he did, and none of them were ever

able to bribe their way to freedom, so bribery hardly seems likely in his case. The

best evidence, though, comes from some old Venetian government documents.

They indicate that soon after the Chevalier escaped from the prison, the ceiling of

his old prison room had to be repaired. Why would they need to repair a ceiling

unless he had escaped exactly as he said he did?

The reading passage and the lecture are both about the accuracy of the Chevalier de Seingalt memoir, which included his life and adventures. The article states that some critics see the Chevalier distorted or invented many events in the memoir to make his life seem more exciting and glamorous than it really was. However, the lecturer proposes a different point of view about the memoir. She postulates that the memoir is still considered accurate and reliable as a historical source.

First of all, The reading passage mentions a possible contradiction in the Chevalier memoir. It indicates that Although the Chevalier said he was very wealthy while living in Switzerland, evidence pointed that he had to borrow money from a Swiss merchant. The lecturer rebuts this argument. She posits that borrowing money does not mean the Chevalier was poor. Instead, he had assets and properties that he had to sell to get cash. Before his money arrived, he had to borrow to keep spending.

Secondly, According to the reading, some critics are skeptical about the Chevalier conversations with Voltaire assuming that these conversations could not be accurate because the memoir was written many years after these conversations took place but surprisingly the Chevalier mentions exact phrases from these conversations, which would have been hard to remember after long time. Nevertheless, the lecturer suggests that the Chevalier had to take notes and write down everything immediately after his conversations with Voltaire. She further introduces the evidence that witnesses who lived with the Chevalier saw him regularly consulting notes and journals while composing his memoir.

Finally, the author also illustrates how critics are suspicious of the Chevalier story about escaping from a notorious prison in Venice, Italy through a hole in the ceiling. They rather think Since he had many politically well-connected friends, the Chevalier was able to be free through bribery. The lecturer, on the other hand, asserts a different scenario. In the lecture, the speaker says that bribery seems unlikely in his case because he had even more powerful friends who were not able to bribe their way out of prison. She further boosts her argument through the evidence that documents from the Venetian governments indicated that they had to repair the ceiling after the escape.

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Average: 8.5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1373.03311258 146% => OK
No of words: 375.0 270.72406181 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33066666667 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.758761719 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 145.348785872 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554666666667 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 419.366225166 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.587248255 49.2860985944 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.055555556 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268933128354 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838022057556 0.0996497079465 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689739002282 0.0662205650399 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167727179288 0.162205337803 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550958337872 0.0443174109184 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 63.6247240618 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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