Recently, there has been a debate about the professional portrait of teenagers girl, his owner asserts that this girl is Jame Austen ( the famous English author)
Recently, there has been a debate about the professional portrait of teenagers girl, his owner asserts that this girl is Jame Austen ( the famous English author). The author in the reading passage completely fine with this claim and he gives three evidence to support this assumption. While, the professor in the lecture totally disagrees with this claim and he argues each point that has made by the author.
First of all, the text assumes that as this portrait is belonging to Jame Auston's family member, that in turn, make it impossible to expect that this portrait is not for her. As her family member definitely know her very well. However, the professor refutes this assumption and he claims that this portrait came up to the public after 70 years of Jame's death. Virtually, the person who said that the girl in the portrait is Jame would never see her before. So, he might be wrong.
Second, the author in the text asserts that the resembles between this portrait and Casandra's sketch( which is the only trusted sketch for Jame Auston until now), would support his claims. Conversely, the lecture maintains an opposite side of view by saying this resembles may be because the girl in the portrait was relative to Jame so that would make the resembles logically acceptable. Furthermore, there are a lot of shreds of evidence assume that the girl in the portrait was a distant niece of Jame.
Finally, the author contends that the style of painting in the portrait emphasize that it must be depicted when Jame was teenagers. Obviously, this is misleading information as the professor prove in his third critics. More ever, the professor claims it is true that the style looks like the painting's style at that time, but, the stamp on the canvas support a different story. Actually, this type of black canvas did not sell in London until Jame turned 27 years old. So technically, it would be hard to believe that the girl in the portrait was Jame.
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Recently, there has been a debate about ...
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...er asserts that this girl is Jame Austen the famous English author. The author in...
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...ach point that has made by the author. First of all, the text assumes that as t...
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... the text assumes that as this portrait is belonging to Jame Austons family member, that in ...
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...pect that this portrait is not for her. As her family member definitely know her v...
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...see her before. So, he might be wrong. Second, the author in the text asserts t...
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... portrait was a distant niece of Jame. Finally, the author contends that the st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, so, third, well, while, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 22.412803532 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 338.0 270.72406181 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77218934911 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41152573936 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 145.348785872 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511834319527 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9108196475 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8125 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442426598031 0.272083759551 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151126436316 0.0996497079465 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226032349917 0.0662205650399 341% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278222016367 0.162205337803 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160939061615 0.0443174109184 363% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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