The reading passage and the listening is about the famous portait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet which was painted by famous Duch painter Rembrandt. However, the reading claims that the protrait is not a work of Rembrandt and gives specific reasons behind it; whereas the professor said that after re-examining the protrait the researchers are confirmed that it is indeed a work of Rembrandt and refutes each point of the reading by explaining them.
First of all, the reading passage says the protrait has inappropriate dress combination which is usually not seen any work of Rembrandt. The professor refutes the point by saying that as the protrait went through an x-ray, it showed that the original painting had an simple fur collar. The luxury collar was added later to the painting to inhance it's value.
Secondly, the reading claims that the painting had light and shadow effect but Rembrandt was a master of painting light and shadow. However, the professor says that as the original painting had simple collar, it reflected light behind the face and it looked more realistic. After editing the original painting the reflection of light did not show properly.
Thirdly, the reading says that the protrait was painted on a severel pieces of wood panel which Rembrandt never used to do. But the professor opposes the point by saying that, the original painted was made on a single piece of wood from the same tree Rembrandt used to paint. The painting was glued onto a panel to make it more valuable later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
...t showed that the original painting had an simple fur collar. The luxury collar wa...
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...dow effect but Rembrandt was a master of painting light and shadow. However, the ...
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the face and it looked more realistic. After editing the original painting the refle...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 259.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91505791506 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45139997069 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471042471042 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0975790549 49.2860985944 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.727272727 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262195348297 0.272083759551 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120357443128 0.0996497079465 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465170219183 0.0662205650399 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177963952182 0.162205337803 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286172434025 0.0443174109184 65% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.8541721854 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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