silver coins found on the North america
The reading and the lecture are both about the silver coin which was discovered by Native American archeologist in the state of Maine in the United States. The author of reading states that coin is not real piece of historical evidence. It placed by someone to mislead the people. The lecturer thinks that many archeologists believe that is not fake and it represents the Norse came from Europe to America.
First of all, the author believes that where the coin was discovered that site representing far away from the Norse settlement place. Coin has no real connection with settlement.This point is challenged by the lecturer. He says that Norse did travel to obtain objects from Maine site. Furthermore, he points out they could not settle during their time of the travel.
Secondly, the author states that no other coins have been found at the Canadian sites. He argues that it means Norse did not bring any silver coins with them in North American settlement. The lecturer refutes this argument and suggests that when Norse went back to Europe they packed up all things. Therefore, probably they brought back their silver coins in Europe.
Finally, the author mentions that North American did not consider the coin as money. The lecturer, on the other hand, states that silver coin was attractive to native Americas, because it was used as a neck less or as a beautiful silver jeweler. He puts forth the idea that Norse use coins as a trade with them
In conclusion, lecturer effectively casts doubt all the claims presented in reading passage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 263.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95057034221 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49932258167 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551330798479 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8453468234 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299558571155 0.272083759551 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926360458229 0.0996497079465 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740033708433 0.0662205650399 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147778938848 0.162205337803 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104845903292 0.0443174109184 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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