do you agree or disagree that in past young people are dependent on their parents to make decisions whileknow they are able to make their own decisions.

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do you agree or disagree that in past young people are dependent on their parents to make decisions whileknow they are able to make their own decisions.

Becoming an adult is a very special part of anybody's life. That is time for learn new things and to acknowledge about new system in the world. Generally, I believe that in modern era, young people are sufficient to take their own decision because they grew in modern life. I feel this way because of few reasons which i will explore in following essay.

First of all, youngsters are very familiar to advanced technology. Young people know that how to use technology to negotiate their way. For example, if someone wants to choose a career, then instead of take advice from parents he chooses the internet. In the internet every type of information is available. This is easy way for someone to find a solution. There are also online experts who give the answer of the question. On other hand; in previous years the technology was not this much advanced young people need to get help from parents. In this century, sometime parents need to help from their children to learn about new technology. In fact, young people are more expert to find new things rather than their parents.

Secondly, in addition to known of new technology they could get more exposure to world. This may be due to having high facilities from their parents. In modern life, young people have everything like car, mobile phone, personal room and good education in high profiled school. These amenities are very helpful them to be familiar with the world. For instance, if student want to know about university and its requirements or want to visit the university campus, he can go there by own. He does not need to take help from his parents. Additionally, he could search it by own, since he has enough space to find resolution.

In conclusion, young people are enough mature to make settlement of their own life. Since, they have enough knowledge and facilities, they are enough capable to make own decisions.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81595092025 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49802511481 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536809815951 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2431415676 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.3636363636 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228638921052 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640704453288 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084649655205 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161660356841 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919811133407 0.0645574589148 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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