summerise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific point made in the reading passage.
In this set of materials, the reading pat explains the way that one kind of dionasor used to survive that method is migration, and, the listing section refutes the information persented in tha passage, and, argues that these dionasors were stable in the living section and did not migrate another place duting winter.
firs, the passage persist that they diet were plants and they needed them during winter nad them don not grow in winter. However, the lecture makes the point out that at the time dionasors lived there weather was 12 as much warmer as now and sunshine made the climate more warm than today. therefore planets could grow most than today and dionasors did not have food problems and they could sutvive during winters and could find food.
Second, according to the text skeletons of theem show that they lived in herd and this is pont that they migrated, the speaker disagrees whith this point. and, asserts that living in herd do not show an animal is migrating periodiclly such elk in the sourth of america which live in herd but they do not migrate and kind of stationary animal, Hence living in herd can not persuade experts that they migrated.
Third, the article claims that they body structior and the ablity of them to go walk long distance is sign that the migrated, on the contovarcer, the lecture points out that these dionasors did not these ablities as a whole. although the adultes could go to the long distance, the juvenail did not do this kind activites. therefore, they body structiore can not convince us that ther migrated.
In conclusion the talk bolsters, the mentioned piece of information in the passage. the speaker finally said that they lived in the constant place and the did not migrate during cold seasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firs
... migrate another place duting winter. firs, the passage persist that they diet wer...
^^^^
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... made the climate more warm than today. therefore planets could grow most than today and ...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
... made the climate more warm than today. therefore planets could grow most than today and ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...the speaker disagrees whith this point. and, asserts that living in herd do not sho...
^^^
Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...sors did not these ablities as a whole. although the adultes could go to the long distan...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 323, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...uvenail did not do this kind activites. therefore, they body structiore can not convince ...
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Line 9, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ed piece of information in the passage. the speaker finally said that they lived in...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, second, so, therefore, third, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 303.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80858085809 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30068750152 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531353135314 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8899114106 49.2860985944 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.454545455 110.228320801 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 21.698381199 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136250695269 0.272083759551 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516585696424 0.0996497079465 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323684517511 0.0662205650399 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694797361953 0.162205337803 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161550632104 0.0443174109184 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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