The article and the lecture are both deal with the dinosaurs migration to survive from intolerable winter condition of the North Slope. While the author of the reading thinks that it is possible for the huge dinosaurs to travel for great distance for extensive food source during unbearable weather for three specific reasons, the lecturer opposes the author's claims. In her opinion, these theories don't necessarily provide compelling evidence of the migrations.
First, the author of the reading claims that the plant-based edimontosaurs' diet is one of the reason why they had to face a challenge to find variant food source. Furthermore, it is stated in the article that since the North Slope winter was harsh enough to freeze the entire plant species that feed the dinosaurs, the edmontosaurs need to travel more food-friendly regions in cold periods. In contrast, the lecturer argues that the edmontosaur species did not have to move significant destination for their diet because of relatively warmer temperature. Additionally, she maintains that because the North Slope placed special location that keeps daylight for lengthy hours, this created suitable condition for vegetation in summer warmth. In fact, the growing condition affected even in the colder times of the years by providing nutrition rich plants for the dinosaurs.
Second, the author mentions that the multitude of skeletons that are discovered from the single site provide the evidence of herd living style. On top of that, it is added that living in a group helps the dinosaurs migrate with coordination for a great length. However, the lecturer calls her arguments into the question by saying that living in the herd doesn't have to intend to migrate during the colder periods. Further, she remarks that many other species of animals live in the herd to any other purposes such as protecting themselves from predators.
Third, the writer asserts that the edmonosaurs' physical functions are suitable for long distance migration. In addition to that, it is noted in the reading that since finding nutrition rich food site required considerable amount of capability to endure up to 1600 km extreme coldness in short time, the specific dinosaurs have physical adaptability to overcome this situation successfully. As opposed to the author, the lecturer holds that despite of mature dinosaurs, juveniles don't develop the ability to survive in the bizarre condition. She highlights that because of the youths, the adults would prefer to stay at the location and bear the winter environment with their immature dinosaurs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... claims. In her opinion, these theories dont necessarily provide compelling evidence...
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...mpelling evidence of the migrations. First, the author of the reading claims ...
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...on rich plants for the dinosaurs. Second, the author mentions that the mul...
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...stion by saying that living in the herd doesnt have to intend to migrate during the co...
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...otecting themselves from predators. Third, the writer asserts that the edmon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, third, while, in addition, in contrast, in fact, in short, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 30.3222958057 198% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 5.01324503311 419% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 1373.03311258 160% => OK
No of words: 412.0 270.72406181 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31553398058 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73171605383 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 145.348785872 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538834951456 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 419.366225166 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5708353406 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.875 110.228320801 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 21.698381199 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 63.6247240618 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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