both the reading and listening is about the work days for employees in a week.the author of the reading demonstrates that short work week is benefits for both employee and company profits. the lecture cast doubt on the claims made in the article.he says less work time wont effect on company profits and employee too.
first of all, author points out that if a company offer short work days for employee, it may increase the company profits.this point challenge by lecturer he says that company should increase the number of employers and provide enough spaces and more computers for employee as a result to cover the work loads.furthermore, he argues about medical benefits which must pinpoint for employee thus, it decrease the profits of company.
secondly, the author contends that less work time may provide more rest full life for employee and would give chance for a worker to spend the free time with their families. the lecturer rebuts this arguments .he says that less salary wont provide stratifying life for employers because less work decrease job stability and challenge their life style.
finally, the author mention that short work time reduce unemployment rates.the lectures posits that. he says that if employee e works for 80 percents benefits it will not be sufficient for the workers to stay in same conditions of life.
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...be sufficient for the workers to stay in same conditions of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, thus, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 223.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0269058296 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55697410858 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538116591928 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.065405201 49.2860985944 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.142857143 110.228320801 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8571428571 21.698381199 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 7.06452816374 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413693695386 0.272083759551 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207771563251 0.0996497079465 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903559534368 0.0662205650399 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268625227821 0.162205337803 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020551692395 0.0443174109184 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.3589403974 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 53.8541721854 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 63.6247240618 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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