TPO-01 Integrated Writing
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Directions: You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage. Typically an effective response will be 300 words at least.
Question: Summarise the points made in the lecture,being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.
In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiring companies to offer their employees the option of working a four-day workweek for four-fifths (80 percent)of their normal pay would benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and the employees who decided to take the option. The shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alert, and as a result, they would make fewer costly errors in their work. Hiring morestaff to ensure that the same amount of work would be accomplished would not result in additional payroll costs because four-day employees would only be paid 80 percent of the normal rate. In the end, companies would have fewer overworked and error-prone employees for the same money, which would increase company profits. For the country as a whole, one of the primary benefits of offering this option to employees is that it would reduce unemployment rates. If many full-time employees started working fewer hours, some of their workload would have to be shifted to others. Thus, for every four employees who went on an 80 percent week, a new employee could be hired at the 80 percent rate. Finally, the option of a four-day workweek would be better for individual employees. Employees who could afford a lower salary in exchange for more free time could improve the quality of their lives by spending the extra time with their families, pursuing private interests, or enjoying leisure activities.
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The reading and lecture are both about the working days in a week. The author of the reading feels that many employees are willing to accept 4 days a week for eight hours and take less salary. The lecturer challenges the claims made by author. he is of the opinion that less working time requires more employees and more office place with computers.
To begin with, the author argues that shortened workweek would increase company profits.The article mentions that in the remaining time they would feel more rested and alert.this specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. he claims overall employment would increase and many jobs would demand by people without work. Additionally,he says companies might raise expectations.
Secondly the writer suggests would reduce unemployment rates.In the article,it is said that some of their workload would be shifted to others.The lecturer,however, rebuts this by mentioning that you could advance career.he elaborates on this bringing up the point that there are more chances to lose own job by company management.
Finally,the author posits that four-day workweek would be better. Moreover they would have more time to spend with their families and pursuing private interests. In contrast, the lecturers position is that everybody could entire work week. he notes that there are promotions,that can easily help to find a job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...k for eight hours and take less salary. The lecturer challenges the claims made by ...
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Suggestion: He
...r challenges the claims made by author. he is of the opinion that less working tim...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...workweek would increase company profits.The article mentions that in the remaining ...
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Suggestion: He
...argument is challenged by the lecturer. he claims overall employment would increas...
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...and by people without work. Additionally,he says companies might raise expectations...
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...uggests would reduce unemployment rates.In the article,it is said that some of the...
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...reduce unemployment rates.In the article,it is said that some of their workload wou...
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...eir workload would be shifted to others.The lecturer,however, rebuts this by mentio...
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Suggestion: , however
... would be shifted to others.The lecturer,however, rebuts this by mentioning that you cou...
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...wn job by company management. Finally,the author posits that four-day workweek wo...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...that four-day workweek would be better. Moreover they would have more time to spend with...
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Suggestion: He
... that everybody could entire work week. he notes that there are promotions,that ca...
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Suggestion: , that
...week. he notes that there are promotions,that can easily help to find a job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 218.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33486238532 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79022787631 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619266055046 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 79.5050662257 49.2860985944 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9166666667 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06452816374 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437709322671 0.272083759551 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142662603035 0.0996497079465 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880732669621 0.0662205650399 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24217005558 0.162205337803 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336155867149 0.0443174109184 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.