Both reading and listening discuss a speacil work of rembrandt who is most famous of seventeenth dutch painters. The reading states that there are some gossips about some painting of him so they do not belong him becuse of color and style and they remove of artist's works. However, the speaker states the gossips are true but they are belong painter and recentley added painter's works.
First of all, the article claims that the painter are knows with the his attention to the details but there some problems about woman's dress in the portrait. The woman dressed a collar which only servants dressed and she has a luxurious no servant can have. The speaker disprove this point by saying that after hundered years someone changed it. it is different because someone want to increase color of painting.
Secondly, He is expert of painting light and shadow. but there are some challenges in some work between of the elements expecially face of women. It is the dark fur collar and does not fit. The speaker states that the face is different and more realistic in original work.
Thirdly, the article claims that last problem is wood glued panel. He generally use wood panel and he did not preffer to use glued panel and has no painting who in glued panel. The speaker disagree that it used to enlarge size to make grand and valuable. He has some works like it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...tates the gossips are true but they are belong painter and recentley added painters wo...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
... claims that the painter are knows with the his attention to the details but there some...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'disproves'.
Suggestion: disproves
...urious no servant can have. The speaker disprove this point by saying that after hundere...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...ged it. it is different because someone want to increase color of painting. Secon...
^^^^
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...is expert of painting light and shadow. but there are some challenges in some work ...
^^^
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...oblem is wood glued panel. He generally use wood panel and he did not preffer to us...
^^^
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'disagrees'.
Suggestion: disagrees
...ainting who in glued panel. The speaker disagree that it used to enlarge size to make gr...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 239.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71966527197 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2190568969 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543933054393 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.288963734 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2 110.228320801 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 21.698381199 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261641880557 0.272083759551 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755088482415 0.0996497079465 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532415018259 0.0662205650399 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139492518628 0.162205337803 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199228418054 0.0443174109184 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.3589403974 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 53.8541721854 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.0289183223 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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