I believe, in the twenty years, the Speed acts as an important factor in transmission rather than costs and prices. The people in the future are not able to do maintenance and prefer relax status in comparison to these days. also, the technology will give special individual devices to the the people that is not similar to these trivial vehicles.
The first reason is time importance for people that live in twenty years later. Despite the fact that speed is an important characteristics in today transmission, these cars that we use today are not able to satisfy our growing requirement to the high speed transmission. For example, too many people in these days use airplanes and high speed railways to decrease their time. As a mater of fact, in the future, the time management acts an important rule in economic issues and the governments will improve their ability in this domain.
The second reason is the future shape of cities. In that times all the devices and technologies will prepare a calm and safe mean for the people that want to go to their destination. The trivial cars need more time in maintenance and are not efficient. In the future the people prefer a calm life rather than spend their time with the other trivial things. In fact, The more technology grows the less they spend their time in trivial things.
The last reason is the future shape of the individual vehicles. Due to the fact that, the technology is growing in unbelievable speed, The people have higher ability to invent professional structures. In addition, there are many ideas today that need advanced technology to be implemented. For instance, a vehicle that has ability to fly takes an important role in just science fiction movies today. I think, these opinions does not become true until new technology does appear. So that all the patents that proposed today will reshape future life.
In conclusion, Despite the fact that there are a lot of people that use cars as a primary vehicle, that can satisfy their daily requirement, in the future those will be concentrate on time and calmness in their life. In ten years, the city structures will be improved and the people does not need to use their individual vehicles and they are able to reach their destination with modern vehicles. Also, in the future the shape of individual vehicles is not similar to the one that we are using today.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ial individual devices to the the people that is not similar to these trivial veh...
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... true until new technology does appear. So that all the patents that proposed today wil...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268888888889 0.261695866417 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.14 0.158904122519 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0977777777778 0.0723426182421 135% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0333333333333 0.0435111971325 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0355555555556 0.0277247811725 128% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113333333333 0.128828473217 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0111111111111 0.0370669169778 30% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.5950202611 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0355555555556 0.0208969081088 170% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.122222222222 0.128158765124 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0155555555556 0.0158828679856 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0155555555556 0.0114777025283 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2396.0 1645.83664459 146% => OK
No of words: 411.0 271.125827815 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8296836983 6.08160592843 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.04852973271 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313868613139 0.374372842146 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214111922141 0.287516216867 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.133819951338 0.187439937562 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102189781022 0.113142543107 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5950202611 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423357664234 0.539623497131 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.0853139711 53.8517498576 84% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0529801325 161% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5714285714 21.7502111507 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0530969966 49.3711431718 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.095238095 132.220823453 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 21.7502111507 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.878197800319 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.39072847682 206% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.9826207855 50.5018328374 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.8829787234 1.90840788429 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448435079792 0.549887131256 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.15449724653 0.142949733639 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0949864772893 0.0787303798458 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.568895463151 0.631733273073 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133024956609 0.139662658121 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210218850405 0.266732575781 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767440658145 0.103435571967 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.516886550048 0.414875509568 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0405097588373 0.0530846634433 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.357009145339 0.40443939384 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321051363081 0.0528353158467 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 3.49668874172 286% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.2958057395 146% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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