TPO-04 - Integrated Writing Task Endotherms are animals such as modern birds and mammals that keep their body temperatures constant. For instance, humans are endotherms and maintain an internal temperature of 37°C, no matter whether the environment is wa

The reading and the lecture are both about modern reptile which is endotherm animals. The author of the reading believes that dinosaurs were endotherm mammals. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made in the article. He thinks that these animals are not endotherm.
First of all, the author point out that fossil of the dinosaurs indicates they were living in polar region. It is mentioned that animals who maintain their body temperature could live in such area. This point challenged by lecturer. She says that presence of fossils in polar region does not mean that dinosaurs are endotherm. Furthermore, she argues because the polar region has both warm and cold environment. Thus, it proved they were not well to maintain their body temperature.
Secondly, the author contends that leg position and movement of dinosaurs also support that modern reptiles were endotherm.The article notes the legs of modern endotherm are underneath the body. The lecturer rebuts this argument. She suggests, the were not underneath of the bod, if so their height and weight would been more.
Finally, the author states that haversian canal in the bone structure of reptiles allow them to grow quickly. Th lecturer, on the other hand, posits that they have growth ring instead of haversian canal in their body structures for growing, which helped them to grow fast.

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Average: 7.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... that dinosaurs were endotherm mammals. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made ...
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Line 2, column 417, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as both warm and cold environment. Thus, it proved they were not well to maintain...
^^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ort that modern reptiles were endotherm.The article notes the legs of modern endoth...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have been' or 'be'?
Suggestion: have been; be
...od, if so their height and weight would been more. Finally, the author states that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 222.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10810810811 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46465148436 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572072072072 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0625988525 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 21.698381199 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06452816374 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444464647222 0.272083759551 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128430800953 0.0996497079465 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882614324881 0.0662205650399 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239193751703 0.162205337803 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506320502499 0.0443174109184 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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