TPO-08 - Integrated Writing Task Toward the end of his life, the Chevalier de Seingalt (1725-1798) wrote a long memoir recounting his life and adventures. The Chevalier was a somewhat controversial figure, but since he met many famous people, including ki

In term of whether the Chevalier’s memoir is true, the reading and the listening are contradictory to each other.
First of all, the writer makes the point that the Chevalier was not very rich as he said, because he borrowed money from other people. However, the professor demonstrates a different idea that he had to sell something to get cash, so he must borrow money to live until his money arrived.
What’s more, contrary to the belief in the reading passage that the conversation between the Chevalier and Voltaire may not be accurate, because it was written many years later, the lecturer says that after every conversation, Chevalier would write it down, and reviewed it before he wrote the memoir. Therefore, the
conversation is accurate.
Finally, the author states that Chevalier should have bribed for freedom instead of escaping the prison from its ceiling. In contrast, the speaker refutes that bribery is impossible because none of prisoners that had more powerful friends than he did bribed jailers for freedom. In addition, the government document indicates that soon after he escaped from the prison, the ceiling was repaired.

Votes
Average: 6 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'first of all']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220183486239 0.261695866417 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.151376146789 0.158904122519 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0596330275229 0.0723426182421 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0550458715596 0.0435111971325 127% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0550458715596 0.0277247811725 199% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146788990826 0.128828473217 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0229357798165 0.0370669169778 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74836137257 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0229357798165 0.0208969081088 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0045871559633 0.00154638098197 297% => OK
Determiners: 0.105504587156 0.128158765124 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0183486238532 0.0158828679856 116% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00917431192661 0.0114777025283 80% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1156.0 1645.83664459 70% => OK
No of words: 187.0 271.125827815 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18181818182 6.08160592843 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.04852973271 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385026737968 0.374372842146 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.31550802139 0.287516216867 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20320855615 0.187439937562 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133689839572 0.113142543107 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74836137257 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.539623497131 120% => OK
Word variations: 65.441638772 53.8517498576 122% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 23.375 21.7502111507 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8547600382 49.3711431718 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 132.220823453 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 21.7502111507 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.878197800319 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 54.925802139 50.5018328374 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.49122807018 1.90840788429 78% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.732429322349 0.549887131256 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.149657327445 0.142949733639 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0624755113327 0.0787303798458 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.763535949095 0.631733273073 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.182392378147 0.139662658121 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.380677436158 0.266732575781 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120711967652 0.103435571967 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.171316764238 0.414875509568 41% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.111408080012 0.0530846634433 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.412123351765 0.40443939384 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.199973305393 0.0528353158467 378% => Less connections among paragraphs

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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