The reading doubts accuracy of Chevalier’s memoirs and questions the veracity of the details of his life, while the lecture confirms preciseness and validity of the writings and life episodes of Chevalier.
First, the author claims that Chevalier was not rich. In Switzerland he borrowed money from a merchant. However, the lecturer argues that the man converted his wealth into money. As it took some time to get cash, Chevalier temporarily borrowed money from a merchant.
Second, the passage doubts the accuracy of conversations between Chevalier and Voltaire. Specifically, it is stated that a lot of time had passed before those conversations were noted. By contrast, the lecture claims that the talks were written down by Chevalier right on the next night after talking to Voltaire. Moreover, witnesses saw Chevalier consulting his notes before documenting the conversations.
Third, the reading questions the way in which Chevalier escaped prison, stating that he bribed jailers and his powerful friends assisted him. On the contrary, the lecture highlights the fact that after Chevalier’s escape there was a need to repair ceiling of his camera, and mighty friends did not chance to help him. Thus, the lecture supports the idea that Chevalier escaped by drilling a hole in the ceiling.
Overall, the reading casts doubt on the richness of Chevalier, accuracy of his conversations with Voltaire and his escape from prison, while the lecture proves that Chevalier was wealthy, noted conversations accurately and escaped prison on his own.
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- TPO-08 - Integrated Writing Task Toward the end of his life, the Chevalier de Seingalt (1725-1798) wrote a long memoir recounting his life and adventures. The Chevalier was a somewhat controversial figure, but since he met many famous people, including ki 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, third, thus, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 244.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43442622951 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92828370751 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.6443497987 49.2860985944 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425652584843 0.272083759551 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159812177087 0.0996497079465 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572445467559 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241845348124 0.162205337803 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314534311 0.0443174109184 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.