In the passage writer has explained that nowadays young people are reading far less literature,novels,plays and poem.Writer has also explain that less reading of literature has effects on reading public and people are lack of imagination.But speaker has contradicted and corrected many things which is inaccurate when compared with what happened in real.
First,writer has explained in the passage that in previous days people used to study literature,poems,plays and novel a lot so that they can make imagination but nowadays due to less reading of such novels and literature people cant make imagination.But this point is totally contradict by the speakers and argues that other books such as science,history etc can also help in imagination not only literature,poems,novel and plays.
Second,writer says that nowadays people are wasting their valuable times in watching movies on television and due to which they are not influencing to read.Writer has also explained that there are many talented writers but they are lacking audience.But speakers says that brilliant movies on television also helps to learn and helps in understanding of languages.This is another part where experienced contradicted theories.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ssage writer has explained that nowadays young people are reading far less litera...
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...g people are reading far less literature,novels,plays and poem.Writer has also explain ...
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...r less literature,novels,plays and poem.Writer has also explain that less reading of l...
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...e,novels,plays and poem.Writer has also explain that less reading of literature has eff...
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...blic and people are lack of imagination.But speaker has contradicted and corrected ...
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...red with what happened in real. First,writer has explained in the passage that in pr...
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...ous days people used to study literature,poems,plays and novel a lot so that they can ...
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...ng of such novels and literature people cant make imagination.But this point is tota...
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...literature people cant make imagination.But this point is totally contradict by the...
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...e imagination.But this point is totally contradict by the speakers and argues that other b...
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... argues that other books such as science,history etc can also help in imagination not on...
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... help in imagination not only literature,poems,novel and plays. Second,writer says ...
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...erature,poems,novel and plays. Second,writer says that nowadays people are wasting t...
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... which they are not influencing to read.Writer has also explained that there are many ...
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...d writers but they are lacking audience.But speakers says that brilliant movies on ...
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...and helps in understanding of languages.This is another part where experienced contr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 183.0 270.72406181 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66120218579 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75857783513 2.5805825403 146% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 145.348785872 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562841530055 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 13.0662251656 23% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 21.2450331126 287% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.0293990543 49.2860985944 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 345.333333333 110.228320801 313% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.0 21.698381199 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06452816374 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 4.19205298013 382% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272830576422 0.272083759551 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201955051558 0.0996497079465 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916925155882 0.0662205650399 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201955051558 0.162205337803 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916925155882 0.0443174109184 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.7 13.3589403974 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 53.8541721854 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 5.55761589404 308% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.0289183223 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.44 12.2367328918 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.42419426049 122% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 63.6247240618 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.7273730684 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.498013245 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.2008830022 268% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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