tpo 11 literature reading
The material discusses that people read less literature today than they were in the past. While reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage.
Firstly, the reading details specific points regarding this topic, namely declining in reading literature reduce people's immagination. Next, reduce reading in general has lower the level of culture. Finally, reduce literature is because of less support.
Conversely, the listening challenges the points one specific contradiction is literature books not the only ones which enhance people's creativity and immagination, there are history, science and pollitical analysis books that are high quality also and could stimulate brain functions. In addition to that, less reading time in general does not mean the cututre level could decline also, watching movies or listening to music could promote culture; furthermore, culture is changed, and today it speaks more directely. One final point, less support of literature is not readers' problem, but it is authers' problem, because their topics are very hard to be understanded, to support it lots of literature today suppose to be easier.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s creativity and immagination, there are history, science and pollitical analysis...
^^
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ain functions. In addition to that, less reading time in general does not mean th...
^^
Line 5, column 709, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
... to support it lots of literature today suppose to be easier.
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iterature today suppose to be easier.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, while, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 22.412803532 40% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 183.0 270.72406181 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62295081967 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75517153174 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 145.348785872 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9267856941 49.2860985944 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.625 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06452816374 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389412367271 0.272083759551 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193157579349 0.0996497079465 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666943966393 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293914300785 0.162205337803 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443521483449 0.0443174109184 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.8541721854 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.2367328918 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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