TPO 17 Integrated Writing Task In the past century the steady growth of the human population and the corresponding increase in agriculture and pesticide use have caused much harm to wildlife in the United States birds in particular Unfortunately for b

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , people
Usually,people have different points of view of whethe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the museums are the best place to visit or not ,when they have travelled to a ne...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eums are the best place to visit or not ,when they have travelled to a new place ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...,when they have travelled to a new place ,and there is some truth in that.Yet,in w...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Yet
... place ,and there is some truth in that.Yet,in what it follows,it will be argued th...
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Suggestion: , in
...ace ,and there is some truth in that.Yet,in what it follows,it will be argued that ...
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Suggestion: , it
...ome truth in that.Yet,in what it follows,it will be argued that museums are the bes...
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Suggestion:
...lace to visit in the new place for those reasons:inspiration and meeting friends....
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Suggestion: Looking
...ns:inspiration and meeting friends. looking for visiting a museum in persons journe...
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Suggestion: ,
... allow his soul to relax and be inspired ,psychological studies claimed that spend...
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Suggestion: ,
...me in musing arts and cultures in museum ,makes you put yourself in the same shoes...
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Suggestion: ,
...he artist which in turn will inspire you ,since every portrait has its own story a...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...rait has its own story and culture. furthermore,scheduling a museum visit offers you a ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , scheduling
...s own story and culture. furthermore,scheduling a museum visit offers you a chance to m...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t.in addition to chatting and having fun ,saving time is another advantage. at...
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Suggestion: At
... ,saving time is another advantage. at the end,I would conclude that visiting ...
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Suggestion: , I
...ime is another advantage. at the end,I would conclude that visiting museums is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 1373.03311258 61% => OK
No of words: 172.0 270.72406181 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8488372093 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.04702891845 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04959457004 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 419.366225166 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 21.2450331126 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.5731748367 49.2860985944 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 208.5 110.228320801 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.0 21.698381199 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06452816374 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0642990591254 0.272083759551 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381428357625 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0143887056453 0.0662205650399 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0381428357625 0.162205337803 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143887056453 0.0443174109184 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.3589403974 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 53.8541721854 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.0289183223 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 63.6247240618 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.7273730684 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.498013245 183% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.2008830022 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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