Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Usually, people have different points of views about whether sports activities should be equally funded As libraries.Some find sports are less important than libraries, since they beleive that universities depends a lot on their libraries as they complete the educational process on the side with the lectures.Yet, in this essay, it will be shown that sports's activities should be given the same amount of money as the libraries for the following reasons:
First,sports offer refreshment for both the body and the brain,as for instance; after long lectures,students need to relax and reenergize their power,and I think that playing sport is the best resort to achieve that.Having fun and spending active time playing with friends could refill the body power again and stronger memories is the gain because obviously high scores are going to be achieved.
in addition, universities have to access a balance between its different facilities,for example
; it is important to spend money to increase the level of educational technologies but at the same time it is important to care about football,bascketball or tennis stadium.The rating of universities depends on how it is perfect in all its facilities,and some international universities afford free scholarships to its sportive students .
to sum up,it is important to give equal financial support for both sports and library'facilities as they have the same importance because of the mentioned reasons as soprt makes students'memory fresher,and the money should be distributed in a fair way between all university facilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, as for, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51440329218 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39729661984 2.67179642975 127% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61316872428 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 20.1344086022 402% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 241.78824528 48.9658058833 494% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 446.666666667 100.406767564 445% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.0 20.6045352989 393% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.6666666667 5.45110844103 526% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199526301735 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136687121694 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380194989138 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105245909661 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549050090493 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.0 11.7677419355 382% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -19.2 58.1214874552 -33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.10430107527 298% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.1 10.1575268817 355% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 10.9000537634 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.94 8.01818996416 149% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 10.002688172 580% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 10.0537634409 342% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.247311828 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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