TPO-18 - Integrated Writing Task In the 1950s Torreya taxifoha, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida, started to die out. No one is sure exactly what caused the decline, but chances are good that if nothing is done, Torreya wi

Torreya taxifoha is a type of evergreen tree which is very common in the state of Florida. But the population of this tree decreased recently and scientists are investigating the reasons behind this problem. The reading passage proposes some reasons to address decline of Torreya. But the lecturer thinks that proposed method are not satisfactory solutions to solve this problem.

The reading passage thinks that by reestablishing Torreya in same location, the population of this tree will increase. The reading passage thinks that Northen Florida's microclimate is favorable to Torrya's growth. Because microclimate in this area is cooler and wetter than other regions. But the lecturer thinks that the whole region of Florida is strongly affected by warm and dry weather and reestablishing Torreya is not a good solution.

The reading passage thinks that using assisted migration will help scientists to grow Torreya. Because by moving Torreya to an entirely different location, scientists will help Torreya return to an enviroment. But the lecturer thinks that assisted migration didn't work good for black tree lotus which spread quickly in another place and killed other plants. The lecturer thinks that this method will have unpredictable outcomes.

Finally, the reading passage thinks that by moving Torreya to research centers, scientists can monitor enviroment and conduct research on Torreya. But the lecture thinks that by using this method, Torreya will not resist diseases in forest. Also, research labs don't have enough capacity for other plants to grow.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 243.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45267489712 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65389667071 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485596707819 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1609196375 49.2860985944 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 7.06452816374 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37417937419 0.272083759551 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153642688219 0.0996497079465 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100311638271 0.0662205650399 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261265182548 0.162205337803 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325952257447 0.0443174109184 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.2367328918 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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