The reading and the lecture are both talking about buzzing system which is the new tactic, used for advertisement called buzzing system.
The author of the reading passage believes that consumers should know that what are they buying themselves and they are responsible to know about the truth. The lecturer cast doubt in his lecture. He thinks that all buzzers are ordinary users of product and they do not lie. They will tell the truth.
Secondly, the author states that consumers will believe what is being told by the buzzer. He argues about pretending. The lecturer rebuts the argument by saying that the buzzer are always telling the truth although they are paid for telling that. He suggest that he will answer thousand of questions asked by the consumers.
Finally, the author mentions that social interaction will hurt because of buzzing. He is of the opinion that we will be less thrust full of people in general. The lecturer, on the other hand, states that it is open to people and does not destroy trustfullness at all.
Essay evaluation report
The lecturer cast doubt in his lecture.
The lecturer casts doubt in his lecture.
Sentence: He suggest that he will answer thousand of questions asked by the consumers.
Description: The fragment He suggest that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace suggest with verb, past tense
Sentence: The lecturer, on the other hand, states that it is open to people and does not destroy trustfullness at all.
Error: trustfullness Suggestion: trustfulness
flaws:
No. of Words: 177 250
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 177 250
No. of Characters: 836 1200
No. of Different Words: 97 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.647 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.723 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.296 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.722 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.337 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.565 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...re responsible to know about the truth. The lecturer cast doubt in his lecture. He ...
^^^
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...ough they are paid for telling that. He suggest that he will answer thousand of questio...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...ng that. He suggest that he will answer thousand of questions asked by the consumers. ...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'in general', 'talking about', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.19587628866 0.261695866417 75% => OK
Verbs: 0.216494845361 0.158904122519 136% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0515463917526 0.0723426182421 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0257731958763 0.0435111971325 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0721649484536 0.0277247811725 260% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144329896907 0.128828473217 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0670103092784 0.0370669169778 181% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.37479073032 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0103092783505 0.0208969081088 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.118556701031 0.128158765124 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0309278350515 0.0158828679856 195% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.020618556701 0.0114777025283 180% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1039.0 1645.83664459 63% => OK
No of words: 177.0 271.125827815 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87005649718 6.08160592843 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.04852973271 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367231638418 0.374372842146 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242937853107 0.287516216867 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135593220339 0.187439937562 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0677966101695 0.113142543107 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37479073032 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 145.348785872 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581920903955 0.539623497131 108% => OK
Word variations: 52.0307625863 53.8517498576 97% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0529801325 92% => OK
Sentence length: 14.75 21.7502111507 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2253202459 49.3711431718 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5833333333 132.220823453 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 21.7502111507 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.878197800319 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 39.0437853107 50.5018328374 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.29508196721 1.90840788429 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.558713463774 0.549887131256 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.092828796098 0.142949733639 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0672812814578 0.0787303798458 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.591522165196 0.631733273073 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.206672856976 0.139662658121 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.238189963033 0.266732575781 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101183566158 0.103435571967 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.376605355673 0.414875509568 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0941431439243 0.0530846634433 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.377967647297 0.40443939384 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781690909416 0.0528353158467 148% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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