Travel is crucial for human beings. Some people think that travel in your own country is neccessary. Others think that we should go to foreign countries for travel. I agree with those people who think that we should go to foreign countries. I have following reasons for my idea.
First of all, we as parents should take our kids to to other countries so they will get familiar with their culture and country. Probably in future they want to immigrate to the country ,for instance I had travel to India as a kid and I get familiar to their culture and in future if I want to study I would definitely try India as one of my options. Due to the fact that they have various cultures and languages. They have different ways of thinking too. They have different cities and all the people from different languages and religions respect each other and each other religion.
Moreover, if I take my kid to foreign country they have to get used to to other language as well. I really love to go to France. Not only because of museums and historical architecture that are there but slao I always like french language and French accent and french lives. They live free and without any obligation. In contrast with our country, Iran. We speak only our native language and no English or French is taught in school
Furthermore, if they want to study in the future it is better for them to have an experience with their family. With the family we explore everything in safe way.We can explore the nature and cities much better with our family. If we make a mistake with new country our family will not make fun of us and laugh at us.
All in all, considering my reasons above it is obvious that I believe that we should travel to other countries.
Essay evaluation report
Not only because of museums and historical architecture that are there but slao I always like french language and French accent and french lives.
Description: 'Not only...but also' is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: Some people think that travel in your own country is neccessary.
Error: neccessary Suggestion: necessary
Sentence: Not only because of museums and historical architecture that are there but slao I always like french language and French accent and french lives.
Error: slao Suggestion: slay
flaws:
The fourth paragraph is off the topic.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 17 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 317 350
No. of Characters: 1385 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.22 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.369 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.303 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.85 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.183 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.53 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.204 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...all, we as parents should take our kids to to other countries so they will get famili...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re they want to immigrate to the country ,for instance I had travel to India as a ...
^^
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...o foreign country they have to get used to to other language as well. I really love t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ive free and without any obligation. In contrast with our country, Iran. We speak only o...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...amily we explore everything in safe way.We can explore the nature and cities much ...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'in contrast', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202346041056 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.140762463343 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0879765395894 0.0866891130778 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.049853372434 0.046263068375 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.126099706745 0.0685040099705 184% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.131964809384 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0146627565982 0.0351676179071 42% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.38177221581 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0557184750733 0.0309702414327 180% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.049853372434 0.0887237588012 56% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0234604105572 0.0209618222197 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0058651026393 0.0139019557991 42% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1738.0 2387.08602151 73% => OK
No of words: 316.0 408.028673835 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313291139241 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205696202532 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.113924050633 0.174417080927 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0727848101266 0.112833075102 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38177221581 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477848101266 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.6815383034 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.6315789474 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4971457027 48.84282405 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4736842105 120.699889404 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6315789474 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 37.2011992005 45.7405998639 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.10185185185 1.45489161554 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27100448637 0.300154397459 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.159806259135 0.103427244359 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.143737015494 0.0752933317313 191% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.508842751838 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184635679329 0.151897553556 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995637291702 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551195882806 0.0781384742642 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.238074372074 0.336927656856 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.127021283002 0.067059652881 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158797600299 0.210909579961 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429173228499 0.0618886996521 69% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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